If there was one or two words to express the state of mind of the writer, it would be 'Free' and 'Pure'! These subjects somehow resonated with his heart and his conviction to join this sect strengthened.
nickel l’histoire est bien. à lire .je recommande
He couldn't help but realised he had directed himself towards the bed as well.
This story is great and good in everything from the writing to story. But I had already caught up with the latest chapters as chapters are too few for me. So I am looking for new novel to read but couldn’t find a good one although I have one in mind but it just started and has less chapters too but still got great potential based on releases chapter till now. Wanna check that book out. Ok I will tell the name but like my review if you find that book is good.Great here you go.NameHolographic Conjuring SystemThis book got only 2 chapters at least for now. Check it out and don’t forget to like my review.
What do I say.... This novel is an absolute BANGER ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) To anyone wondering give it a shot (not a backshot, that's the MC's job lol) This novel's so silly it's so good hahahah
I feel a bit scammed I really enjoy the book so l decided to splurge a bit a buy privilege to read ahead. But then you have only posted like 3-4 chapters. I understand that as an author you might be busy or burnt out but then at least please tell your readers your that your taking a break, that way I know to wait to buy privilege until your back to writing.Author I really love this book but can you please at least tell us why or for how long you'll be busy. As a reader (and I think I speak for many) it's much easier to wait if we know at least why or to approximately how long.(Thank you for listening to my TedTalk.)(Also posted this exact post in a chapter’s comments but I thought I am more likely to get a response here.)
I don't understand the 5 star review bots. There is no reason in anything. It's just a continuous "and then, and then,and then..." Author probably doesn't know how to express a 'thought' or else every action wouldn't be labeled with "that seemed appropriate."
Writing quality is above average, story development is predictable and there was some plothole probably to rewrite, character design is meh because not choosing intelligence since this world INT also equal to IQ, supposedly slowed down enemy movement and increased thought process to do multiple spells at once... but dexterity...makes him have faster thought process which is illogical...the stat to real life application is bad... if MC become genius because INT is high then i might quit.
Hiii! First off I just want to say that I’m really glad you wrote in a strong female lead. Most of the novels on here have male mcs, and while I’m not mad it, I would love to read more ffs with female mcs. The ones I find typically have a female mc who is strong but is constantly put in situations where she has to be saved by the male love interest. I love how your mc is just as strong as her love interest if not stronger. Plus, most mha ff are harem novels with no substance. I love how the romance in ur ff is gradual and not forced into the novel. I can’t wait to read more!!
So heads up, I only read the free chapter because I’m poor lol. But throughout all of them I found the book to be very enjoyable. There are grammatical errors, but you can ignore them. The story telling and character development are great, and the idea behind the magical cards is wonderful. To sum it all up, I love this book.
There are quite a few... negatives, should we say, to this story. I'm not saying it's intrinsically bad but by stating you think the quality is there, you've opened up a can of worms. I think you've got a solid base but you need an editor and some quality time thinking over your work. I've only read the first chapter and I'm bothered by it's foundation. Most of your world background is going to come from the places your character travels to and as well, we don't have any background at first at all, even in the first chapter, on the world that the MC leaves behind. Your character design is too bland for my tastes. A character called Alex, the hero of heroes with a system, it seems too Mary Sue. At least you've made him younger, that gives him room to grow. I like that idea.The overall quality is a little subpar. I mean, it's 100 times better than most xinxia novels on this platform simply because the content is actually digestable but it could use some work. I'd suggest running over it and ironing out the kinks, for instance the constant use of the characters name. You can call him 'Alex' or use his last name, use the word boy, youth, teenager, or just not need to include his name at all.Your updates are regular, that's fantastic, I'll give you that.Overall, it's a solid novel but you have a rocky foundation. Whilst I haven't read past the first chapter, I can see the allure of the novel.
Op Mc, action filled, harem. Truthfully it's more interesting than mga to me since ive read more of it in a shorter amount of time than mga in years. The novel's name is a bit misleading as mc's strongest power and "cheat" is he's op bloodlines and talent. The Art itself is relevant mostly in the first 1or 2 thousand chapters,later on its a bit overshadowed by mc's own bloodlines since hes ancestors were wayy stronger than a true immemorial dragon elephant. The romance isn't deep but it's there. With that many chapters the novel was doomed to be ******** harem but he doesn't smash every pretty girl he see's( well most of them, he IS Op after all). Story has a gradual feeling to it even after thousands of chapter so the progress is clear enough so you wont get bored. The beginning was a bit annoying but it's quite interesting later on, dont be afraid of the chapter number its actually a fast read, has it doesn't give you brain damage every now and then like a few novels i dont need to mention again and is a relatively easy read , so give it a try at comerade if ur interested after the first 60 chp. Peace