This shocked Annie and Faith, Jayson however was unbothered and plainly responded, "Oh? You can do that too? Here I thought it was a special skill."
Everyone retorted on their minds in the midst of this chaos. How could they not? Her words are simply ridiculous. Or should they say, she was being too capricious from the start?
Even though the massive Sphinx was trying to cheer him up, he still felt regret and humiliation. Walking back over to the pack of Sphinx creatures, the strongest Core Builder of the pack walked over and said, "I will avenge you brother."
‚That's one way to maneuver around a weird conversation' I thought.
"Ene?"
"Ten months is too much for me, let's make it six months"
[Decription: Fernandus has reported the presence of several witches near the Impassable Mountain Ranges. The host can use any methods to recruit them. The quest will be considered complete the moment they join the host.]
now let us check this ln i am attracted by the description he is just like a man with a glutton system ☆_☆ hope it have harem romance and comedy which is very typical in every ln that have system
To start, I've seen so many people complaining about the slow pacing of the novel. Please understand that it is a SCHOOL SETTING, you should be expecting relatively slow pacing. How many novels with school settings have fast pacing? Generally not very many. When you see that it's a school setting, this pacing is what you are signing up for.On another note, the novel has decent to good character development and world building due to the "filler" chapters (if you think that these chapters are filler then I'm sorry that your IQ is in the double digits). Whilst it isn't the best novel, its refreshing to see a novel that places emphasis on characters and its world rather than meaningless action. If anything, the action based chapters are the worst part of the novel as they do nothing to advance the story or develop the characters/world and are clearly the most filler-like parts of the novel.
The book has a good world background and character design
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There is a lot of potential in this story. Its story development is fast and purposeful. Each development really hits home with such a emotional subject matter, and it did honestly hook me in.I would like the author to just take their time abit more. Slow it down and include more detail. The first 'date' of the two characters could of had a bit more time and detail put into it as an example. Great story, great development. Just needs a bit more time put into certain areas and this could be an amazing piece of work.