I consider myself as part of the story, although I only lurk around the chat room most of the time and laugh at some of the discussions. I sometimes want to jump in, but then my boss would ping me to make an update on my work hahaha. Nice work!
The first was quite good but the moment he met his ex it became **** he doesn’t explain what the system is even though everyone can have one after killing a monster and he doesn’t tell anyone anything even tho it can make them follow him and you should expect arrogant young masters and **** here even tho his ex had a chance of killing the young master **** she didn’t she said something abt it’s against jsutice ****
Moody, thought-provoking, sad and true to life. A tightly written and fast moving novel. I hope to see more from the character of Jain in the future.
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I'll talk about the quick points because of which people remain hesitant to pick an original story to read. ● Quality, if anyone complained you better write your own book which has to be excellent than this. (I'm personally a fan of this author because of the flow, vocabulary and the techniques of narrations he uses) ● Storyline, just focus on the title (Wink)● I've nothing to criticize since the author has grasp over everything and seems professional into the field.( just give it a go xD)
First, I like the book cover, the synopsis was quite catching which got me interested...and it was worth it.Great work done Author...All the best!
The themes explored in this book were thought-provoking and made me think about the world in a different way. Such an amazing author!!!!!!!!!
It is a very good story, despite the few chapters, a fresh writing style with great potential for revenge is evident. I hope they continue the story since it looks very entertaining
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(MINOR SPOILERS FOR THE FIRST 15 CHAPTERS)This is a novel that i can see blowing up in the future because it has the typical tropes of the top novels especially when it comes to overpowered mcs.This novel is mainly a mindless journey where you can see the mc destroy everybody in his path and outsmart everyone he meets and i honestly like it, i think its fun to read. The novel also has some attempts at comedy which are okay i guess.The grammar is really good expect for a few spelling mistakes here and there which can easily be overlooked.The story isnt top notch mainly because we dont know the mcs limit, we have no clue what his true power is, especially since he has the ultimate plot armor which is the spirit inside of him. I think the main way the author can improve the novel is by letting us see the mcs limit.When it comes to the world development i think this is a factor that is going in the right direction. I like the world that the author has set up so far and i am excited to see how it will grow from now since we are only at chapter 35 at the time of writing this review.When it comes to character development i think this is a very strange factor of the novel. The mc is sometime a cold killer without mercy and sometimes an extremly trusting individual that reveals alot of stuff easily. I think him being cold makes sense to a certain point considering how he was bullied when he was younger, still think its a bit strange tho. But im extremly interested to see how he will react when he finds out about his sect, i think that is when we'll see huge character development.When it comes to characters in general i think that this is a part of the novel that is done very well, each character has their own personality and none of them feel plain although some can reveal a bit too much to complete strangers at times which feels unrealistic and almost like its just a lazy way of giving the mc info without him really earning it.The stability of updating has improved recently, even though the author doesnt upload or is late sometimes mainly because of him being sick here and there which i think is a justified reason for not uploading.All in all i give this novel a 4.2/5 because even tho its a good novel it still cant compare to the top novels of this site like the birth of the demonic sword which has much better character development and story overall, library of heavens path which has much superior comedy and world building and supreme magus which has better character development and a more solid start. But then again all of these novels have had 250+ chapters to develop their story.Im still gonna follow this novel since i do think it has alot of potential and im interested to see how the story will progress.(I will be updating this review in the future if there are any drastic changes in the story or writing quality.)