This story starts out very similar to another novel on here, Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao, where the MC is originally a supreme being that died and is reborn/transmigrate into the same world years after his death. After awaking, the MC is OP with both cultivation and alchemy knowledge. Everyone around the MC, including the sect he is in, seems to have the IQ of a dummy and hell-bent on trying to kill him for the dumbest reasons. As for love interest, the MC is always reminiscing about his former lover that may or may not still be alive. There is a maid with a special constitution and two beauties that are acquainted with the MC.
This author is one of the best authors out there just like Elion he knows how to keep you hooked and waiting for the next chapter. ????????$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$!!$!$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$!!$!$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Another VR game novel.Translation (or writing, idk, lazy to check) is good.Other than that it’s just generic story about VR game.Boring. Nothin new. Or maybe just because I read many novels in this genre? IdkMC is handsome. Beautiful eyebrows, beautiful eyes, beautiful voice etc, you know the usual. Girls also beautiful.Equipment, stat, somehow rare drop, rare boss, rare quest although every other player is 2 months ahead of MC.Everything MC did are shocking feats. Enemies left and right, face slapping here and there.This is just a novel with basic templates for VR game genre. Nothing new.
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The story is very good and as you described it is wonderful and please bring more episode soon. I am very much looking forward to next episode
I like this novel a lot but it's slightly low paced. The leveling up is very slow so it starts to get a little boring. pace it up a little. overall it looks interesting. Looking forward to next episodes.
Very nice kingdom building novel. The story neither fast or slow, it is just enough so that we can understand the concepts and not to slow that it gets boring later on. MC is the ideal for this kind where he is careful and calculative, not arrogant but also not someone like a super good guy.
A great novel! So first, writing quality. The writing quality is absolutely fabulous, the author doesn't have to change a thing. Second is stability, the book is too new to rate this so I gave it 4 stars. The story development is insane right now, I can't wait for the next chapter, it drives me crazy. Character design seems a lot like the kings avatar with just a worse history, waiting to see how the character grows. World background, again, is kind of cliche. Just waiting to see its uniqueness. Overall, great novel so far, try taking a read at it, it might just surprise you.
A scarce goodie. A rare find in the web novels repertoire of works. I'll lurk in the darkness and strike from time to time to binge new chappies. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and even earn more.
I like the story. Sure the grammar needs to be touched up but it is still readable. What gets me is the fact that the mc is so moronic!?? For a so called “#1” player the mc gets enraged by a small slight and that is ok he can get revenge when he gets stronger. The next day he immediately shows hostility and alerts the enemy even when he is far weaker in a lot of aspects. It’s just stupid. Why did I write this again? I don’t want to delete after I put so much time into this. ?u200d♂️
a challenger rank 1 with 2000+ points and we had to read 10 chapters of him beating some random newbies fk man i couldnt even bear to read half of the chapters and he didnt even flex his account WHAT A SCRUB HE COULD GET SOME VA JAI JAI
Basically, it's a mess. The author is incoherent and the translator keeps making mistake with pronouns he/she, his/her.For example, MC is supposed to to have a lvl 80 character however it has the stats of a lvl 1 noob. If the level doesn't increase stats (like in 99% of games/stories) then author needs to say what it's used for.Also, this is supposed to be a game that transformed into a reality and sometimes, author says MC and his character act like one but the next moment he talks about keyboards...