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the story was good at first, but the MC don't act like a thousand years old person. i mean you are in a different universe what is the first thing you will do? obviously find more information, but go in a game he know nothing about not even the Basics. someone with thousands years of experience should know how important information is. human are in top of world because of their intelligence and that how they made cultivation possible in this part of the story, should not he know at least that?
So the MC Ren is like a textbook himself.... It feels like another Ye Xiu from King's Avatar for me xD But the only difference of these two is that Ye Xiu is a top-tier player that retired (More exactly like he was kicked out from the team) from the professional team but he 10 years worth of gaming experience while our MC Ren here had 10 years worth of knowledge and was rebirth to the past ^_^From the start, although it might looked like the usual start for any rebirth novels out there but for me, the author execute well on how to deliver each scenes and the world-building is widely explained.I hate that leeching guy Roni since in the past, he was the one who spread about Ren's background and it also saddens me that Ren's parents, especially his father died in the previous life and his mother had bedridden because of illness. Keep writing! ^_^ I love this novel already! ^_^
I would presume, like many, I'm here because I stumbled across the anime and just had to have more. Because this story is addictive, and it is such because it's good. Beyond good, it is outstanding. Amazing. Brilliant. Asonishingly well-developed, well-paced, well-characterised, well-written story. I've read 662 chapters so far, and it just keeps getting better.The translator has my utmost respect. I know nothing about the Chinese language, and without their wonderful efforts, such a tale would have tragically flown over my head, and I would presume many of the other readers' too. It's remarkable how the chapters get updated at a steady, daily rate. I thank them greatly.It's a good idea to be aware for native English speakers such as myself, that it can be somewhat challenging for the brain to comprehend at times, particularly at first. The gramatical errors are there in every chapter, and the sentence and paragraph structure may appear a little odd, but with practise and determination these minor details don't matter a single bit. After all, it's the content that we're here for. And the content is truly worth it.It took an entire week of reading from dawn till dusk (roughly) to get to here so far, and I'm eargerly looking forward to the next chapter.I'm only worried about the MCs health, honestly, with how much he smokes he's got to be looking for an early death. Oh well. xD
I like the story
The story is now getting interesting.
Omo ... omo... in english... translate please!
Good job Author, an interesting story ......
What nonsense chapters are these! So many unnecessary chapters everyday! Author hurry up and send James back to Earth! James has time to mingle and save other women?! Why there's no Earth POV??? I'm really bored reading chapter without Thea! Bring back Thea in the story! Goodness!!!
Please stop dragging this to more story.
love love this series