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Awesome read! can't wait for mass release!about snowflakes complaints, grow up
author sama are you really going to continue this book because 8 enjoyed it alotPlease continue
I love this story concept so much and the wrighting quality is really good. I’m not really an expert on the English language or anything but I didnt notice any misspelled or incorrect words that would decrease the readability. Also vivid words that help visualization and immersion. The story progression so far is decent, bogging down the story by going over what he did every day through the time skips gets rid of unnecessary info that can slow down the story and make it less enjoyable too read. Another aspect that f the story I absolutely adore is the structure of the world.how the fables die when forgotten and how the have their own separate world. Usually I find it difficult to get into a system novel because they rarely ever touch upon how the Mc is getting stronger just from killing thing. Where is the system getting all that power too give it too the mc. the system in this novel from what I interpreted is mostly administrative in nature. As in they don’t don’t get their power from the system, the system just helps them focus and understand thier power. I love this novel and I sincerely hope it continues.Last but not least: cute and innocent little elves brutalizing people while smiling and giggling??? gotta love that.
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I am quite satisfied overall. The way the MC was introduced was climactic, the build up was good and I like the world backround which is not as old European setting that is always being used! I hope the chapters will be uploaded as soon as possible! Thumbs up to the author!
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This book is great. I love music and you feel it in almost every chapter. I only wish the updates were a little quicker because I’m hooked.
So unoriginal. Such lazy writing they only changed minor details. Webnovel representatives please stop promoting trash. We are missing out on good novels.
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Its a generic cultivation novel, lots of random killing, bad characters, plot points don't go anywhere or are forgotten. generic cultivation world and stupid mc.I mean he's from earth and went to that world, it's never mentioned again. His character doesnt suit someone from earth, gets to killing everyone very quickly without hesitation, acts like other cultivation MC's, stupid and arrogant.Every new character its just another, oh a debt let me go kill a bunch of people and collect it, repeat forever.It's not a new concept, the storyline is basically non existent the world building is non existent and horribly told. The villians are one dimensional. Everyones a basic copy and paste villain.Honestly is such a low quality novel, what can you expect from a chinese cultivation novel. Theres only a few 'good' ones and the rest are just bad copy's.In fact this entire novel idea is ripped off another novel with a similar story.My recomendation is avoid.
