Bruh, why were the last 20 chapters so rushed? It felt like a different person wrote it entirely. Wtf. The story was soooo slow paced throughout and then suddenly those last 20 chapters went super fast paced. The last chapter was barely anything either. There was no emotional resolution whatsoever. MC did his thing and then “The End” with no follow up to the thing. The epilogue was barely an epilogue. It was more like 1/10 of what the actual epilogue should have been.
MOST FLUFFY WHOLESOME NOVEL!! LOVE IT! Worth the read!!
Fui vê spoilers e esse traste é mesmo o ML,decepcionante
good, unlike the usual cultivation books you'd come across on webnovel that has no basic logics...................................................
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At 10 chapters, looks like great character building slowly endorsing him into combat sports. Right now it's just boxing but if we see different martial arts like muay Thai, ju jitsu, that would make the novel whole lot complete. Still it's definitely a novel I am very much going to be reading in the future. I will be saying to author to keep it up.it is brilliant and I cannot wait to read more of it.
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this novel is a breath of fresh air. it has good pacing and progression the system is interesting and shows the authors creativity the main character isn't overpowered due to the system but he isn't weak either. overall it's just a well written and balanced novel
So far this is really great! I havent read the other books on this trial read, but I definitely don’t think that they can be better than this.