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I sincerely wish this was translated... Sure some of the characters are hateful but I genuinely like the Romance and curious how far it'll go...
The concept of colorblindness was interesting and definitely piqued my curiosity towards the development of drug and evolution. The paragraphs can be a little too wordy and clunky, but this is just due to my personal preference and can be easily fix with a bit of editing, and has no impact on the story itself. It is worth a read.
The story is so boring and looks like kids bedtime story that it makes me puke rainbows! Dropped at 26 chapter as I can’t take it anymore.Qu’Ali of writing is good with some mistakes here and there.Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5*Story development... There is none! It’s so boring that it hurts. Started ok and that was the best part of the story. They are just training and talking. No action except 5 sentences fight with demon at the beginning. Character are weak without personality, makes me even forget who is who as the author tries to give them different behavior styles but unsuccessfully.World background. Is it bad or good I don’t know. Author explains that there is a lot of discrimination from nobles and demons and war and orphans, but there is no hardship in the story! The worst thing the noble does is speak harshly to Demi humans. Everyone is happy, well feed and even orphanage looks like living in a hostel. No demons no fighting no killing. Basically everyone sings kumbaya while holding hands. They are even so nice that they tell their team configuration and strong points to their enemies...Waste of time.
