FleetingDawn
I deeply resonate with the mc; I just want to be rich, I never wanted to be this handsome. But the heavens are unfair! I just wanted to be some rich young master from a rich family! Once I transmigrate into a cultivation world, see how I’ll wipe the floor with your face!
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Its a Diifferent perspective to cultivation novels.I enJoyed how its not dragged out Either. Good transitions, with the main character being a bit much on one perspective, and choices in life.Though i continued to read because - to each theIr own. just glad it didn’t cross the line, and give explicit details.Overall, it kept my attention captured. It’s nice to still read about his Gentlman side as well! A Giver and someone who thinja of others, and though his “Luck” Is good, He continues to remain humble ????
Not Badlater part of this Novel is BoringRead this You like it... atleast they improve their Quality.........................................................................................................................
I really hope that this is gonna get chosen for voting once again. It baffles me that somehow this didn´t get picked last time. These days most of the trial-reads are basically garbage. Though there are some exceptions like this one.
i love the story so far!! hoping to read more chapter.. Please upload more chapter!!
It is really coool i guessss , i mean it does have a backstory but there is not that many chapter yet sooooo i cant really say about how goood it actually is
Writing Quality ★★★•Many things are translater or was written wrongly or not aligning to what it should be, some are also connected with each other without spacing ex: Iwillkill your...Story Development ★★★★•It's a solid 4 for me because of its superb story pacing, 2 scenes are kinda forced but it's still good.Character Design★★★★★• The way the author gave life to every character and how he/she can make the audience understand how they feel is already chef kissed. Although in the original world there's still some ladder being climbed for the MC to mature it still show its good potential.Updating stability★★★★★• Might change it later....World Background ★★★★★• Since MC is being put to different world or should I say 'virtual world' it gives the story different vibes and different backgrounds but since it's still on the trial and onky released 20 chapters it has potential. This is one of the great trial novel I've read here on this site couldn't believe they actually put something new or kinda 'new' which is pretty much better than the other "novel" which is basically a copied version of a copied version of the original novel.I'll give this one a solid 4.4 and I gladly recommend this...You got my vote....
It had good start but the author really gave up on the system and the MCs character in depth. I only reccomend this novel when boredom has reached you to the point where you too tired to even think. Then it is passable to read. I stopper at chapter 42.
If you think the beginning is slow then it only gets worse as the story progresses the author makes the story slower and slower and adds more and more filler.
Need more chapters
This book is so boring and nothing new. The author has 0 creativity! The story revolve around the main character, going to new places to level up, kill all the enemies and move on! The story line is so bad it will shock you for 3days and 3nights! (Often use my the author)
