FleetingDawn
bro i liked it lot probably one of best sports novel are i ever read the thing i liked most thet mc doesn't have so called overpowered system he also has work but i also feel you are inspired by hitting zone in many scenes ok but i can't read further because i am poor ????
Really like story especially love plot and wish you success. Currently, the only problem is mistakes in sentences, such as using the same word twice when it is enough to do it once(like - You do you.).
I geniunely like it! It's really awesome! It gives out a vibe of interacting with the audience (like deadpool) but without the cursing words... Sometimes. The first few parts of the story is a blast! Although it may look slow, but it's still progress!
Amazing potential, good grammar, and well thought out!!!! This a superb story I hope you don't drop this because I love this story I hope you make this 1000+ chapters and make many more cultivation realms
One of the best I ever read. Comparable to coiling dragons. Wish the quality would remain the same without fillers in the future. The translation is one of the best and the tone suits the story.
I have read astral pet store in start it was more about pets and less about human cultivation. your pet are the main fighting force and you are the support but later mc got way powerful for his pets that they kind of became useless for the story.
Mc in this novel:ahahshshshshshshshshshshhsshshshshshshshshshshdhdhhdhshshdhshdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdshshshhdhshshshshdhdhhdhdhdhdh
I don't know why people even do this anymore. You can't have the tags "anime" and "mech" in a cultivation novel. They do not belong together and if I see a novel with them in the tags, you're instantly getting a 1 star review.
This novel has great world building, character development and fast translation. Normally i dont laugh when i read novels but this one. It made me laugh. It comes the moment when you didnt expect. Every charachter has his/her own background like other novles they dont pop out from ground...
I absolutely love this novel...story is awesome...better character development and best harem...I really recommend this to people to give a try
well so far im hooked, its crazy how just 7 chapters can get you hooked. cant wait for the story to resume. ((the only thing i wish is that i didnt have to write 140 character.))
A unique and good novel. Good plot twist...weak to Strong Mc...chapters are detailed and no Grammatical mistakes...Detailed background...stable chapter update...overall a very good novel to read
