It's pure 100% crap, the writing quality is so bad I can't even stand the thought of reading the whole story, everything is really bad for ex. The author writes stuff written down redundantly ITS VERY REDUNDANT, I bet the author's vocabulary is comparable to a 12 year old child, sometimes the author tries to be smart and writes "high vocab" words but fail miserably, I mean it doesn't match withThe stuff She/he writes down it is completely unbalanced. My point is Don't Read This Shit
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It's my first time to read a story about sexpotion...but the author is good and creative in there own way... I like how the scenes were made..
Action - Op two swords wielding SAO style but a hundred times better with time magic/lawRomance - although it is a little too easy to get into the harem in my opinion the romance is after Comedy - Modern comedy we all love and enjoyR-18 - some of the best I've seen! Mature - mehSword and magic - a desent rpg classic typeCultivation - although it is confusing at times to be honest they all are!Harem - currently :Moon goodess /empress (not now but its currently the path shown) Wolf girl (npc but as the plot moves you realise...?) Angel healer (class seraph but an elf) Sword spirit (hehe) Crafter ( demon lawyer in real life) Kingdom building -Goal: Celestial kingdom Current(ch 140):...Uh..W-..Well...Um..Reincarnation -There's a solid reason why he came back (ch 110 ish reason reveled )
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the concept itself is already interesting.. and when you read it it's truly amazing how the author builds up the story and keep you interested each and every chapter. it has some small grammaer issue's here and there but doesn't affects your reading at all.
So far the plot has been good, kinda suits my taste. And in an early chapter, while it may sound like the vibe of Library of Heaven's Path (Mc assuming a non existent master, but turns out to be a real person), it won't last for long and kinda won't cause a real problem in the story
Good novel like this are getting axxed by qidan while trash novel with romance with subtle rapes and cliche dense mc who makes illogical decisions are still top in power ranking what a world we live in .
Translation quality is only okay. you can tell what the characters are saying 90% of the time, but tere are times where you have to reread the same sentence 5 to 10 tImes because you can’t make sense of it or something contradictory happens later and you need to go back to double check. Some of the “pets’” names also change. For example Spider Emperor changes to Spider King right after it’s contracted. There’s a few more cases of this. Unfortunately it ruins a lot of the immersion. I feel like the contradictions are half the fault of the author and half the fault of the translator. Some of it is due to mistranslated text, some is because the author himself wrote something contradictory. Overall, the story takes a bit of effort to read smoothly.
Have you seen a martial artist that can suck everything up? This is a different book I swear, and the idea of it is dope.The main character is not all-time OP!The raw is at chapter 2418 and I'm still reading it.
tl;dr - used to be good, now it's crap that either makes no sense or is wasted chapters praising how much better the MC is than everyone elseTMW started out really nicely, the world was well made, and the characters interesting - until about chapter 500, when I realized it's the same characters, with the same issues, same challenges - with different names. This used to be my favorite novel, but it's gotten so repetitive and monotone I can barely force myself to read it. The Author's original Martial World (it's on Wuxia World) is fantastic, but it seems that he's out of ideas, and simply wastes whole chapters sucking up to the MC, showing how cool he is, keeping calm at all situations and has the devil's tongue, rendering everyone speechless with his witty answers, instead of progressing the non-existent plot. It appears the author simply makes things up as he goes, and has no concrete idea what he wants to do aside from adding infinite plot-armor to the MC, to show he is infinitely better than everyone else in the story. Also, like several other reviews mentioned, it appears as if no one aside from the MC has a functioning brain, speaking for no reason and doing dumb **** only to prop up the MC, to showcase his incredibleness. So far I'm still reading, hoping this novel will crawl its way out of the hole it dug itself.
interesting story...interesting plot,looking forward for more drama, but hoping so bad,that this story can be different from love story of mo ting...