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Atleast use your orginal cover and NC disciption.This novel is BS.I will not recommend to both Old and New reader.ONE OF THE WORST MC..
Good one for now interesting concept and finally an mc that doesnt care abou women and just wants to get stronger.
dices que es harem pero no poligamia ? por ende no va a avanzar en la relacion con ninguna hasta el final de la novela ? sigh...............
Goof Novel, keep updating author.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1
There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes. The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss?Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star. World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities. Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.
Heya, it's a good read, the story is good, the characters are good, and the English is good too (at least better then mine) a missing word here and there but nothing to fuss over. I'm glad I picked it up and spend my time reading it.I hope there will be some plot twist down the line though, as it kind of feels that the hints for the plot aren't very subtle. But that might just be my taste! Doesn't make the story worse.All in all, I recommend!
The plot is interesting but very common, I trust you for making something very unique out of this, I also like the male lead, kinda reminds me of Cobra, so globally your plot is good but i suggest you to download Grammarly, it will help you to drastically improve your writing
Really love the way you have started and i really like the details you have given.Looking forward to more chapters.I feel it will be a wonderful story
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Please continue writing this story it's a great one