ChaoticReaderCy2
Not my cup of tea, to say the least...I found The Novel's Extra quite addicting by the time I stumbled across it. Although addicting I dont think it should win any awards or anything or the story should be immortalized, it had its fair share of misha** and errors but its still good nontheless for me and many others. The concept of an author being placed in his own novel mostly as a side character was such an amazing idea to me that I went hunting for other kinds of novels with such concept. Albeit some were good I'd say a lot were mediocre or just plain bad. I mean no offense saying this, but this doesnt really scratch that 'amazing' novel itch ive been wanting to scratch since finishing TNE. Its not good but its not bad....just meh, this novel is just another time killer for me during quarantine. But hey I decided to drop this pretty early in the story. I may regret it or I may not, who knows?Thank you for your effort author but it isnt for me. Hopefully many others will see this novel and decide to stick around longer than I had. Best wishes for everyone! :D
BESTNOVELOF2018EVERTHEAUTHORISAGENIUS!4 words:YOU RAISE ME UP!!!Yeah, I gotta say, this novel is the best one. It deserves to go up in ranking if you know what I mean? Pour those power stones over here!
Reason why I dropped this novel.1.the fight scenes are boring.2.the cohesion of words are a little bit distracting.3.the flow of the story is disappointing, I mean a 12 year old child is leading a squad on global wars. I know it is a fantasy theme but at least make it believable.Note: I could list more reasons brother but let me cut to the point. you are a good writer but mech novel are not for you.
A really well done book. 100% recommended.Enjoy the story of our MC maintaining his prison order against various powers, which scale up throughout the story.A bit out of topic, but I still want to see the table of Ruler's Authority which I didn't quite understand during my time reading, though it didn't impact major story progress.
I will update Chapter 13 from 1st Nov ... thank you.
Fan-freaking-tastic!!! I cannot WAIT for more!!! It's SO freaking good! <3 _ <3
Haha, this is so nice. I actually read his name wrong, it's not Peter, kinda made me laugh. Hehe. Anyways just read the few chapters and It's great. ?
such a heart warming story! every chapter is a page turner
There are so many symbolic layers in this text that I keep thinking about. Let me start with the gate. Young Fu Yanci waiting outside the Shen family gate, never knocking, afraid of dirtying it. The gate represents everything he feels he isn't—belonging, worthiness, acceptance. He's an outsider looking in, and even his desire to enter is tempered by self-loathing. But Shen Shuli? She literally breaks down the gate metaphorically by chasing off the bullies and declaring him under her protection. She doesn't care about his status or his cleanliness or his place in the family hierarchy. She just... claims him. Then there's the light imagery. "You appeared—like a beam of light, illuminating my entire world." This isn't just romantic dialogue, it's thematic. Fu Yanci has spent his entire life in darkness—literally and figuratively. His grandmother was tortured to death, his mother lived in fear, he was bullied relentlessly. Shen Shuli is the light that breaks through that darkness. But here's the thing: the light is threatened. The nausea at the end? It's like a shadow falling across that light again. The theme of protection versus vulnerability runs through everything. And the tablecloth scene—pulling it all down, sending everything crashing to the floor. This is symbolic of Shen Shuli rejecting the entire Fu family hierarchy, the false politeness, the performative respect. She's literally and figuratively toppling the structure that has oppressed Fu Yanci for his entire life. The food splattered on Zheng Zezhi and Fu Cuishan? That's poetic justice as symbolism. The people who demanded respect get covered in the consequences of their own cruelty. The checkbook too—500,000 yuan as a weapon. Money as power, money as protection. Shen Shuli is using the tools of the elite to defend the person she loves against the people who use those same tools to hurt him.
The worst writer , so far...weak protagonists and amplifies abuse, violence and torture in every page of this novel. We don't encourage this kind of theme and should definitely ban this author for future writings
Great book!!!
This book is so boring and nothing new. The author has 0 creativity! The story revolve around the main character, going to new places to level up, kill all the enemies and move on! The story line is so bad it will shock you for 3days and 3nights! (Often use my the author)
