Good outline of world ??.In depth character building can be seen from first chapter. Wishing to see more of it.
Nice read. Need More!!!!!--------
OMG, hahaha! I'm really enjoying the story so far, especially since it's BL! *heart* Seriously, I'm only six chapters in and I'm already dying because of the humor! Being stuck in a guy's body, then mistaking the people around her as "Asian" only to find out they're not--simply hilarious! Definitely recommended!!
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If the author doesn’t take his own novel seriously why should I ? Drop
Author here, hence the shameless 5 star rating. Quick disclaimer like many of the other authors out there, this is my first novel. Please be gentle ;). But in all seriousness, I'm here to improve on my writing and hopefully bring you some joy with what I'm attempting the produce with this novel.Please feel free to leave as many comments, criticisms, and suggestions as you'd like. I take these very seriously and hope to grow along the way.
Despite having some words mistake and the background of the world isn't as logical as it could be, the story is understandable and entertaining. I always wanted a more mafia focused story that wasn't atrocious to read. The story flows well but I'd like a bit more development to the character of the protagonist. Overall a great find and a gem in rough. I'm rooting for the author.
Honestly can't stop reading. Puts a new perspective on an old cliche. If your into reincarnation stories with a weak-strong protagonist, this is an excellent read.
The cover hooked me and the premise made me jump in, lurking me to read some epic story. Unfortunately, it was not the case. That first chapter killed it for me. The grammar and writing were terrible but I pushed through expecting some ameliorations or at least a main character that will help me struggle through the errors poking my eyes. I'm not saying the story is bad. The ideas are good but the execution is terrible. Dear author, please, don't give up. But I beg you to fix your writing.
Dont really know what to say except its a good book i hope there will be more if not that really sucks i was enjoying it a lot and that would be a really bad place to end it on chapter 26
perfect MC, perfect plot, perfect everything, at least I know where I can put my money now ? thanks author for this wonderful book!
Harem is ???.........i don't know what I'm gonna say just keep up the good work........ hahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahh