Shen Yin Wang Zuo (Throne of Seal)

Stupid hero has nothing to do with Fang Yuan, I embarrassed Fang Yuan's nameStupid hero has nothing to do with Fang Yuan, I embarrassed Fang Yuan's name

Author is a decent storyteller but the system concept is stupid. System asks MC to spend money or certain treasures. But the treasure comes from the system. All the MC needs to do is give it away in a given time duration. And the plot armor guarantees that the resources the MC have is what the clan or the situation requires urgently. No effort at all. Then he gets rewarded with system point to spend on OP skills or equipment.

idk about this book. it gives me mixed signals. it seems realistic about cliches on one hand and on the other I want to argue against everything it stands for. it's a conundrum. however it is an original take on cliches so it's worth a shot to open your views on other books.

In the first few chapters, the story and the writing are good. Author starts with good amount of world detail, a justified motive for MC and the personality of the characters are kinda relatable. Later, the story's pacing is faster, uncomfortable to read. It feels like this story was planned as a 1000-1500 chapter book, and was condensed into less than 500 chapters. There's no personality to characters, no apparent thinking process of MC, and no logical relation to the original world description. Everything is justified by Author literally writing directly: because I said so. Constant breaking of 4th wall, heaps of time skips. Yet, plenty of pointless filler dialogues in fight scenes. I bought the whole novel when I run out of free chapters. Now I regret it. Dropped at ch133. It's just pure BS at this point.

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light hearted so far and actually like it as a novel to read when bored or just want something simple :DI dont know whether you have a schedule for release but i hope you continue this for a while.