It’s a decent novel not a great one but good to pass the time. Some improvements for author to think about would be details pertaining to characters like hair color , skin color ,personality, relationships , etc. Also, MC so far gets everything handed to him ; there are zero dificulties for him which makes the story bland and predictable.
amazing novel has tons of potential to be in top 10 already better than some of the novel there now good action and plot and not really overpowered
I hate anything gay! Dont just post gay story.
The novel is good and I hope the write will speed up a little bit in his upload of new chapters------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Awesome story.... Makes us to read more and more... To be precise, this one takes us to the place where the story runs...Chetan Bhagat is surely a **** friendly author and has made this book into a wonderful and entertaining one
Interesting leveling concepts in this story. I feel that the story is about to move a bit faster from chapter 40 onwards, especially since main characters have already decided to work together. Looking forward to the updates!
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I do not need to read more, I see what will happen you will do a few prologue chapters until the canon begins and from there you will do all the same only with the MC of secondary character and the heroine of this novel who is the woman who could not be sure It is Xiao ning'er BORED you can see from here that it will only be rubbish and I will not read it until I see comments that good people who read more than 20 chapters, until what I see now it will be like this