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This is Romance, I repeat this is Romance so I’m sorry my fellow brothers of HaremSeekers, but don’t worry the Horror of this one will keep you entertained but I’m still waiting for the Romance since It’s just 2 chapters.
The story has potential. Plot is looking nice. I think you should check the grammar of the language, there seems to be quite a bit of errors. but overall, the story is progressing well. Good work.
very good..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................perfect, but i want more
The idea is really good just needs more polishing in writing and stroy telling. It would had been better to know more about mc in the first chapters. There are times that need more explaining about the things happening but overall all of it can be fixed or with enough time it could be better than now. Keep it up author. Take care.
I'm very disappointed in the MC. For a old man that lived for more than 500yrs, he's not the brightest. I guess it has more to do with his interactions with the women he meets. He never knows how to handle them. I think he lied about his 500 years experience.....
Writing Quality-4: Story Development-0: Character Design-2: Updating Stability-4: World Background-5 This is posted at chapter 500.Frustrating, Frustrating, and Frustrating all starting with capitalized letters. The author wrote this on the premise of slow development and a long story, and slow development it certainly has. There is PERHAPS a negligible change in the mc that amounts to literally nothing after 500 chapters. Which costed me around 5000 coins aka 100 USD(based on current average chapter cost). All just to end up only a quarter of the way through the punishment. This novel is supposedly going to the 2k chapter area, and I DO NOT think this slow plot is worth 400 dollars(others may). Second, I think the tags are a little misgiving, this is after reading other reviews. The tags "romance" and "weaktostrong" are the ones I speak of. The "romance" doesn't mean anything to the plot and only seems to be flirting or trope situations. The "weaktostrong" part is misgiving because the mc may increase in power level but he always remains the weakling/wimp. Now, the writing quality of this novel is wonderful with very few mistakes and plotholes. Story development has been described above although it may not be 100% accurate as I'm using reviews to fill the rest of the story in for myself. Next, the character design for the mc is horrible in my personal opinion. While I loved almost all the side characters and their detailed backgrounds. Finally, World Background and I'm amazed at how thought out it is. It stood toe to toe with my favorite novel on this portion, as the amount of detail and connections everything has is great. Overall, this could've been my favorite novel without a doubt. Sadly the mc is to disappointing with to few improvements, mentally and physically. The emotional roller-coaster it took me on was not balanced out enough and anger took over. I must sadly say I have dropped this novel. The lost potential that was lost is substantial my fellow novel readers.
Love this novel. One of the best I have ever read. ,................ ..................................................................................................
Pretty good upto ch 200 then it becomes generic, characters are 2d, new girls are introduced just to show how ridiculous mc's action are overall would not recommend
Seriously this has got to have the worst stability on updates... its been 2 almost 3 weeks since the last update, the story is great and I love it but goodness gracious don't read till 2028 since that seems like the year it will be finished at this rate. it does not deserve to go premium with this quality.
Needs to be updated daily
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