I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.Moving on to technical issues, I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?All the best!
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It's rather similar to I'm Really not a Son of Providence and I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot. MC is so strong, everything he has is good stuff, he gives away good stuff, he eats good stuff, etc, etc... BUT the MC acts like common man so people who met him respects him.
Unlike the beginning author has become lazy and the update become very unstable.-------------------------140 character limit............still unable to post.
Hey everyone, Biako is here, owner of this work. I hope you all like what i have to offer, this is a story that i worked hard in, (you must forgive the grammar though) I am not an English speaker so there will be a lot of mistakes, however, not that jarringAlso, i would like you all to be patient with story, it grows a lot and has ****-ton of world-building that you will certainly be amazed at please read and enjoy the story, i will start updating 5 chapters/day :D but first enjoy the 20 chapter release.Btw, this is my Patreonhttps://***.patreon.com/BoucettaAmrand this is my [email protected] would be more than glad to receive your help financially if you could, otherwise, the story remains free for everyone to read.
Self-proclaimed professional gamer MC acting like a noob? Check.Mary Sue MC? CheckPlot Armor thicker than the Author's face? Check.Loyal Fatty? CheckInstant Harem of breast jiggling women without even trying? Check.Harem wasted on Clueless Virgin MC? Check.Bland Thug encounters that exist solely to show how awesome the MC is? Check.
I wasn't sure about this at first, but after reading the first couple of chapters, I got more and more into it. By the end of the chapters, I was super engrossed, to the point that I couldn't stop reading, and when I hit the last translated chapter, I felt immense frustration that there weren't anymore chapters left! I haven't felt this way about at webnovel book in such a long time, honestly I really like this idea, I find it quite unique and interesting. I hope this gets picked up for official translation! It just got to the good part too!! I hope the quality will remain the same, because if it does, this might just rival my favorites.
I cant say whats bad about it, but after reading so many novels, i can only sum it up to being dissapointed. I thoroughly enjoyed the first few chapters but i had to force myself to read anything further.. its just too boring, much too much information.
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wheres that one guy that gives us the Chinese name?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is another slow and weak at the start progression type story. The MC gains 'entries' that have some sort of effect on his abilities. One could almost call them equivalent to gaming titles. He starts out having great difficulty going the normal/orthodox route of cultivating qi and goes the alternative route to cultivate the body. The idea is that as long as he makes his body better he will likely finally be able to improve his talents in the more orthodox route of qi cultivation.Personally, I think this story has a great deal of potential. The sect and the world background does not seem to be quite the dog eat dog world type situation. It seems to have rules and laws that members must follow. I will hold on for the next 20 chapters to see if I can really like the story.