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Alcoholic author here, giving myself a shameless review. If you're seeking a captivating tale blending comedy, seriousness, darkness, harem, action, adventure, romance, game elements, system mechanics, isekai, and more, look no further! Open these pages and journey alongside Marius as he finds his way home, accompanied by a goddess. Witness his relentless pursuit, facing ups and downs, as he strives to return to Earth at any cost!
This will be my Q&A about the novel. Feel free to ask anything.
I really enjoyed this story, from the narration to the plot I thought it was put together quite well. I personally felt it was a little too short for me to invest in any of the characters though, since it just takes a while for me to attach emotionally to a fictional character in general. (especially if it's set up to look like that i.e. a dystopian/thriller) The writing was good, granted a couple of typos and other minor things that can be a pain to edit with so many words coming into play. Overall I enjoyed this story and the setting it takes place in. There was one thing that stood out to me though, and that was Ace. He is such a baby personality and I love him with all my heart. We honestly need more screentime for him along with a more in-depth description of what he looks like and a back story.
Give me more pls , this Novel is incredible ........................................................................................................................................
Amazing book.The story development everything is just amazing.If it’s okay can you guys give my book a read. It’s my first time writing. Hope you guys can support me❤️
After reading it so far, I feel like the plot is very disjointed. The overall concept wasn’t a bad one but the execution caused it to turn out confusing and hard to read.
TRASH NOVEL HAIXT............. THE TITLE IS GOOD. CLICKBAIT THIS IS BAD NOVEL. SHAMELESS MC, MORON MC, UGLY MC, ....................................................................... USELESS SYSTEM.. FAP 1 MONTH?? JUST FOR IDIOTIC QUEST... WITH NOOB REWARDS.... CANT HE JUST TRAIN AND train????? OR CHANGE THIS LOSER FACE!! I DONT REALLY LIKE READING. SHAMELESS MC STUPID MC AND UGLY MC TOO..... AND THIS SYSTEM ISNT EVEN HELPING THIS PIG
The plot is interesting but I find the characters childish and gullible. The grammar is also very horrendous and this is the worst part. Although the story is interesting, the grammar is really annoying and worsens the story, even if I’m able to read it.View More
in all honesty the ending was a huge let down. why end it so abruptly. where did the dragon even come from. Some more development and adventure would have been perfect
Definitely didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did when I first went in! The thing that really draws you in is the fantastic world building, and the kookiness of our MC, Auntie Flow.Other than a few minor spelling mistakes, I don't spot anything wrong. The grammar is consistent and the spelling mistakes don't detract from the reading experience.At chapter 27, still a bit too early to see where else this is going but I am enjoying the character interactions and development a lot!I really like Auntie Flow's character design. She comes across as unique and fresh in the scope of normal MCs, and she goes at her own pace, which is really nice.Looking forward to reading more in the future! Keep up the good work, author! :)
how do you give negative stars? I wasted 25 minutes of my life on this trash:(140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters