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In my opinion the story is very good. My only issue with it is that it is too heavily focused on the relationship. If the author would add more background and plot the story would be amazing.
I thought at first it will be a little bit difficult for me to read since it's sci-fi but it's proven wrong when I start to read the prologue and first chapter. It feels like I'm watching a movie. I'm already in love with it!Oh, and I wish the author(s) good luck on the Spirity Awards, tons of luck for this book!
The book starts off ok the plot is a bit slow and cliche but was overall decent. that is until the fbi is brought in the mc becomes careless leaving all types of holes for him to be captured ..im not into reading about beta, soft hearted, or easy to manipulate mcs. Unfortunately the mc fits two of those categories. This is my main reason for dropping....good luck to the author
