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This story reminds me of 'Reincarnated as a fox with a system' written by godadi thought with an owl and a different story.
I think that your story is quite well written so far and I look forward to its future
Very good book. Read up to 800 chapters. I advise readers to not read the book if you like short arcs or stories as the plots in this book are very detailed and last many chapters. The storyline sets up the plot for the future as every word in the book is intentional and some things may be confusing will have a greater meaning in the future.
Loving this story so far!! From the MCs interactions with her family to her interactions with the system are amazing!! I cannot wait to read more and see what happens in future chapters!!!
story seems interesting and characters seem to be unique and different from normal novels but the grammar is too hard to understand. as is it's completely unreadable for me.
Revised review of the author:-
- Some grammatical mistakes here and there in the initial chapters; however, as long as you don't mind those mistake, I will guarantee regarding the story.
- It's going to be a long book. So, be prepared for it.
- No harem
- Many elemental spirits and spirit beasts
- New worlds
- Overpowered mc with hidden powerful enemies.
Hmm...that's it.
I hope you enjoy reading it. If you have any more doubts, you can ask me below this reply.
Thanks for reading my books.
this book is in violation of amazon kindle copyright.this book is in violation of amazon kindle copyright.this book is in violation of amazon kindle copyright.
i dont really read horror stories but this one interested me because of the school theme but to my surprise i was in a horror ride. i hope you all are okay.
Not bad for a story with only 5 chapters. managed to get me perfectly hooked. I don't think i've read a better first 5 chapters in any other books.Keep going Author. Good Luck
this is a great story and had amazing character development. my only complaint is it hasn't been updated in 5 months. I am desperate for more chapters
The story is interesting I'd like to see more chapters update soon. And keep up the story line please. I always like rebirth stories, especially the business ones.
The MC got REINCARNATED/TIME TRAVELED into an Era 100mio years later, he didn't transmigrate since he never left earth... As this book goes premium after 5 Chapter, I call bs! What arrogance to go premium without proofing the quality of the story first. Never ever have I seen a novel go premium before even reaching a two digit chapter count... I won't spend a single coin on this delusional author.
