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I'm all caught up now at chapter 315, and could not put down this novel when I was reading it. I really love how Jaya is developing and it's reallly cool when he meets these past superstars and becomes close friends with them like with Kawhi.Please come back soon author! We miss you ?
You want a review? Here's 1.YeahYou are my fireThe one desireBelieve when I sayI want it that wayBut we are two worlds apartCan't reach to your heartWhen you sayThat I want it that wayTell me whyAin't nothin' but a heartacheTell me whyAin't nothin' but a mistakeTell me whyI never wanna hear you sayI want it that wayAm I your fire?Your one desireYes, I know it's too lateBut I want it that wayTell me whyAin't nothin' but a heartacheTell me whyAin't nothin' but a mistakeTell me whyI never wanna hear you sayI want it that wayNow I can see that we've fallen apartFrom the way that it used to be, yeahNo matter the distanceI want you to knowThat deep down inside of meYou are my fireThe one desireYou are (you are, you are, you are)Don't wanna hear you sayAin't nothin' but a heartacheAin't nothin' but a mistake (don't wanna hear you say)I never wanna hear you say (oh, yeah)I want it that wayTell me whyAin't nothin' but a heartacheTell me whyAin't nothing but a mistakeTell me whyI never want to hear you say (never wanna hear you say)I want it that wayTell me whyAin't nothin' but a heartacheAin't nothin' but a mistakeTell me whyI never want to hear you say (don't want to hear you say)I want it that way'Cause I want it that way
Great Story Progression, a lot of free chapters, and a very interesting setting, although the lack of character background and slow addition of chapters isn't great its still a good novel
just because it's an idle cultivation book doesn't mean I should have to read 15 chapters of them talking about how the families are going to fight with no actual story in the first 20 chapters
I don’t know if this is just me, but I have trouble reading the novel. I find myself having to re-read sentences or paragraphs. The flow reading is messed up and the transitions between paragraphs are rough.
This one will be my #1 novel ahahaha i really love the story and the characters. Hope author can release more chapter.. I cant wait for it....
(Sorry for my English, but it's not my native language)In general it is a good novel, but there are several things that I do not like. I know it has a slow development, but it is too much. In other novels the MC would have already accepted that he is no longer in his world and that now he needs to learn a new common sense, instead of meddling in annoying matters. For this there would be a small event that would encourage him to improve, but in this novel he just takes it back, making the story heavier because it can feel repetitive. I mean, there were already several things that would have made a normal person seriously rethink whether with a normal mentality they could survive, but in this case the MC prefers to stay the same thinking that everything is going to change without him doing something. I can bear that at first he is a fearful crybaby, but that at this point he has not gotten angry one bit with the cause of everything is an idiot, honestly. I understand that he represses himself, but unless it is Gandhi, I do not understand why he does not have a bit of violent reactions to several important things and only worries about small things. These are all the complaints that I have managed to find so far, if I have more I will leave them in the comments.
I haven't really gotten far in reading this book but from what I've read I can tell that the author put a lot of work on the characters. The action is really too notch and I can't wait to read more!?
after seeing so many picked up and dropped novel i don't have any will reading this even this is good ?????????????????????
I liked the novel, the way he treats wives and slaves I didn’t like him being in the shadows it’s cool but it could have been easier, I would have read the rest but it’s very expensive 900 coins to read 100 chapters, without wanting to belittle the guy's job but the way is to see if someone pirates hahaha T.T
Trash novel, so generic it hurts, mc is basic as **** his kids really only eat and are used for comedic effect, every woman that sees him cums apparently, then falls in love, hey you looked at me kinda wrongly-welp it's the death sentence mate. The funniest thing is how fucking unrealistic the interactions, btw every second guy they meet wants to **** with the mc, the ones that don't adore him and are ready to suck him off. I can continue but at the same time i don't want you to waste so much time on this ****, unlike me.
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