Aoki returns with another amazing novel. Writing quality? Top-notch. Worldbuilding? Excellent. Characters? You already know. Give it a read. You won't be disappointed.
Arthur why don't you do 2 or 3 ch in a week instead of 1 you know it just to slow ?
very nice really good very good good good
Lo mismo que dice el de abajo, aunque espero más caps de Naruto x Konohamaru y gracias por los capítulos. Sube más gracias, espero ver muchos
After reading everything I would say that it isn't the worst thing I've ever read but not the greatest either. I say give it try and you may enjoy it and stay to read the rest.●●□Author I still waiting for the good stuff to happen if you know what I mean.
The story is well written. I'd encourage the author to find a more succinct way of showing the system feedback as it currently takes up 25% of a chapter (sure would be nice if inkstone supported tables). I don't feel we know enough about the characters yet as most of the characters, aside from MC were given some background and then left to simmer, but it's still early on in the story. Overall, well done for the first 17 chapters :)
This story is a great read for those that love action, humor, and characters. Let start with the action, the combat that the Dreth participate in are descriptive enough that you have a good imagination of whats happening and is simple enough that you wont get confused or loss track.Next is the humor, the banter between the characters are what i would imagine friends that have been together for a long time. their reaction and comments to certain events are comical and would love to see more of in other stories.Lastly is the characters, like i mentioned before the chemistry between characters seem natural and subtle. each caracter has their own trait and have their own past, i love that the zombies have vague memories of their past like how percy used to be a person that does makeup (dont remeber the name) and how they remeber going towards the dungeon. i also enjoy how your learning about the character slowly and are learning alongside them.Well this is the end of my ted talk, i do hope to see you all in other stories and to the author your doing a great job keep it up.P.S the english is amazing and has little to no errors
OK I like this book I do first the most glaring yet smallest problem :English you need to go back and edit your work you are improving clearly but the early chapters were so atrocious I almost gave upSecond it's been less then a month that's not as much time as you seem to think people have to kill hundreds if monsters a day to reach that lvl you would have to spend zero time looking only one fight after the next never taking more then a minute it's so stupid and then it's repeated by many people let's be consultative and say 100 have level 20 by chapter 50 three or so weeks in 15-16000 monsters killed meanin a million or so monsters in month in an unknown environment with bodies that are contantly changing I mean if you are five times stronger you would have to learn to walk again after all its not a gradual change so martial arts would have to be relearned over and over muscle memory would be completely useless because you'd need a different amount of strength for the same result maning your muscle mom or would have to adapt with every level that would mean many hours of practice for monthsThird pacing 10 or so chaps of hunting rabbits then he gets dragon blood meets a weird monster and gets the love intrest I know there is a narrative reason for that but that doesn't make it an any worse a choice from a writers perspective spread those events out with the monetonous grinding chapters So chapter 55 the Mc let's himself be surrounded instead of idk moving attacking talking strip down kissing his own ass good bye literally anything.this is not the onlytime he is stupid The final problem I have with is with 55 specifically the Mc is bound by rope tied to a stone have you ever used this wepon seen it used in real life anything I thought no because if you had you would relize there is no reason for that rope to stay wrapped around his leg the most you could is a stumble before it just before it just gets pulled back it's like binding some one with an untied rope it makes no senceI liked that you are trying focus on the people a bit not a harem also a positive trying to focus on her personality your English is improving I'm not as good about saying positive stuff I wasn't trying to be vitriolic in this review an hope I wasn't to rambaley and incoherent
I was sad when I found out that the orig was put aside, but whrn I found out about this, I was friggin ecstatic. I was one of the ones that voted for this over on the discord server and it gives me a really satisfied feeling when my opinion matters. I'm really excited to see how The Big Succ goes this time around and I can't wait for it to come!
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See ”Reborn in Space: Pampering the genius Doctor and Businesswoman” for completed version.
Surely a déjà vu ..... same as I can see success rate.....but a good concept nonetheless ☺️Looking forward to it.... ? just hoping that plot is original