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Needs a tonne of work, props to the author and I wish him/her the best of luck.I must say, the first chapter was imho, freaking terrible. It was all over the place, nonsensical mish mash of all the best stuff someone could think of for a modern day mc slapped together into an abomination called Michael.I seriously could not bring myself to read another chapter, I dont say this to discourage the author, it's hard to write! I understand that it isn't easy. This book needs some serious editing and the author needs to just sit and relax a bit, your mc never has to be the everything guy! The best things about characters in novels arent their perfections but their imperfections! All their flaws make them come alive and make your readers empathise with them through their journey! The best thing you can do for your audience is to make them always think about the qualities of our creations that resonate with them! Connecting with them makes your story stand out from the rest of the monotonous garbage that litters this app. You should (If you haven't already but suggesting by the hazardous writing that feels like its come straight from your head to being published) brain storm ideas, the direction you want to go, important antagonists and/or ideas for ones to come! Major turning points in your story that will affect your mc in major ways! These sort of plot points are needed so you can have some sort of direction to love in otherwise it becomes a mess, something that becomes harder to fix the longer you go. Never start the fillings before you've conquered your outline and outlook of where you want your story to go! You may not read this but I seriously hope this helps if you do kind regards
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Firstly your a hard working author. Secondly the mc is rational and ambitious with no moral restrains. Thirdly Im hooked.
I'm really hoping those 3 chapters actually meant for 1 day. 3 chapters/day instead of 3 chapters/week. Just imagine waiting a month to get only 12-13 chapters...
Inconsistent with failed logic from the very start. It’s not as horrendous as other novels but it’s still terrible
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Another typical urban setting harem story. There is even a mildly hidden smut scene in 5 chapters and still this Novel is General audience? Are those ratings for show?
This is actually nice by the way I became attracted to the modern setting as well as the money spending even though i'm a saver up to the point where my mom calls me selfish its pretty true but even so I love luxury stuff but ill never buy them I rather spending someone elses money so this naturally caught my eye with how he spends money and gets it doubled I with that were real....any way this is awesome.
this theme is very good, there are very few currently but I think it's very cool that the heroines listen to the protagonist's thoughts, the development of the story is going very well too, I'm enjoying the decision making of each character
a great masterpiece..................................................................................................................................................................