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Simply amazing. I love all the coincidences and the explanations the author inputs into the storyline. However, I feel like the main character should have a more accurate description of his "skill-set." But, this might be the writer's intention in shrouding it in mystery. I haven't read to the latest chapter, but I am gradually catching up. Anyways, I am loving the story so far.
It's really a cool book for those of you that love baseball. It's a lovely one to me despite not being a sport person. I didn't expect I'd be saying this. The book is that good.By the way, I'd shamelessly share my book, you guys should check out Who?¿ if you have time. It's nothing of sport but I hope you'd like it
omg, this is so awesome and relatable. my grand-father is also a cultivator so i can totally relate to the main character, why else would I put a 5 star?
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Unfortunately this isn’t my cup of tea. I thought it was interesting at first then after a few chapters became bored with it.At the beginning I was lead to believe that the MC was normal but later the MC was anything but normal. The Mafia that was giving MC so much trouble at the first few chapters has now became betches of the MC’s mysterious Dad.As for the MC? Personally I very much dislike this western goody tow shoes MC, not as repugnant as Japanese Beta male MC but I still dislike it nonetheless. I think that Korean novels generally has the best MC.Not the most terrible novel but for me there’s just too many logic hoops to jump through to enjoy this novel.
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The novel is great. Well penned buddy. The you you describe everything is great and the story is pretty good and mysterious. Well done keep going
Overall pretty good. Writing quality was okay; punctuation could use a little work as well as capitalization. I would mainly use more commas to separate phrases. The author has created a vivid and interesting MC, and the story has a cool premise. Keep writing author! Looking forward to seeing you and the story grow!
