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Awesome concept and story. Author Just needs to watch switching between Game Username and IRL name and be consistent with usage. Overall, a great read regardless if you are a gamer, Star Wars nerd, or just looking for a different kind of action novel. Definitely enjoyed.
Love this novel. Don't look at those speaking bad about it+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++000000000000000000000000000000000XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
An interesting idea, the imagination of the author is good and the story seems promising so far.
La novela solo va comenzando pero nuestra un estilo de escritura detallado en su narración, el protagonista muestra una personalidad cómica pero puede tomarse las cosas enserio cuando es necesario; hasta ahora la historia es interesante y mejora con forma mas avanza.
Read it!!
I knew I would love this. Mystery is my favorite genre. The dialogues are gold. I could feel the hurt in Bianca's voice when she was arguing with her mom. The action description also during the exchange of dialogues between characters were superb. I'm very interested in finding out what exactly happened to her friends. This is a must read!
This is a unique spin on the concept of Elementalist itself. I like it very much. Also, the Author provided with several Auxiliary Chapters to supplement the readers curiosity about the Characters. Modern Science, Historical Figures, and Elements from Indian, Greek and Roman Mythology all come together to paint a decent and beautiful picture. I highly recommend it!
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
hello everyone!
Hey Webnovelist!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email [email protected]. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Semangat terus menulisnya! Diksi sudah bagus dan keren, cuma kendalanya masih kurang di kepenulisan.
Salam kenal
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