The best way to describe this novel is: Potential.
The first few chapters have laid a solid foundation for what could be a great novel.
The only thing that could be done better would be grammar.
It's a great misunderstanding novel, amount the novels I have read. I really how the main character deal with the customers' problem though he doesn't fully understand their circumstance but still be able to solve it lol. [img=update]
Review as of chapter 14.
Alright i have been following the story since the very beginning .
Now let's get some basics out of the way it''s a very well written story with amazing descriptions and fights.
Though there are some grammmatical mistakes they have been reducing as we progress.
Moreover i noticed the auhor has corrected many of them.
What i love about the novel the most is the protagonist if i have to compare him with some that can only be our beloved FANG YUAN from RI.
Now don't get me wrong there are diffrences like how Long Chen can feel kinship.
But the qualities that make them similar are.
1)Ambitious - Both Fang Yuan and Long Chen are very ambitious so you won't get your average Jiang Chen which has no shred of ambition whatever.
Long Chen unapologetically pursuing his goals is a breath of fresh air.
2)They are both evil and they know it.
A lot of protagonist like Su Zimo from ESK or Long Chen from NSBHA appear to be ruthless. IMO they are kinda okay.
The author also tries to make them look the good guy by making the villains as humanely despicable as possible.
That's not the case with Long Chen if you stand in his way you are a goner.
He is by no means a hypocrite and understand the laws of jungle.
3)They both feel like they are in control.
The last point is a bit hard to explain but lemme just say this no mc like Fang Yuan or Long Chen appear to be in complete control of the situation.
It also stems fromt their arrogance that all the people around them are beneath them and mere chess pieces for them to manipulate.
All in all author you better don't give up this masterpiecce.
It's a solid 5-star for me. I wondered what realistic fiction was, and if this story is that definition, then it's amazing.
First off, i liked the beginning interviews. It was cute and unique. It kindof gave me a feel of how the personalities of the characters are, which was cool.
The story itself is engaging, and smooth. Let's put it this way.... You always want to find out what happens next.
Now that the first volume is done, here's my review and what I think.
Writing quality- There are still some chapters I have yet to edit, but other than them I can safely say that the writing quality is good. I use both Grammarly and ProWriting as ways to edit my work, so I would hope the time I spend editing my work with them is worth it.
Stability of updates- I can admit that this is the area I need most work in. I enjoy writing but it's more of a hobby. So with things like projects from school, work, etc. I find myself unable to write that frequently. However, I always find time to write at least one to two chapters a week. However, now that I'm done with projects and work, I have more time to focus on writing.
Character design- I feel like this category is good. But it's still too soon to tell. Johnathan is far from perfect and still acts pretty immaturely, but he tries to keep that to a minimum since he doesn't want to die. In fights, all he does really is basic things like punches and kicks. Since he doesn't have any training. Other than that, there's not much else to say. It's still too early in the story to go in depth about his character.
World Background- Same as the last one. Too soon to say anything. All we know now is that humans are turned into zombies and can evolve. That and the world is trying to save as many people as they can with 'bases'. Since the first volume was mostly the introduction to the apocalypse the world-building wasn't too focused on. I focused more on the rescue arc, and the powers they get. However, the second volume will have a lot more world-building and will show the results of the apocalypse.
Other things- Only 24- 30 hours passed since the apocalypse started. The three got right into it and became strong quickly. However, they only seem strong since no other characters were introduced that had powers. The only reason why they got a good handle on mana was because of anime, manga, novels, etc. With those in mind, they progressed pretty quickly. They definitely won't get strong as fast in the future since... Cant really spoil.
Anyway, I hope you give the novel a chance and enjoy it. Thanks for reading!
Thank you. Great book, loving the progress from simple person, receiving gift that changes life. Then progression to cultivating and leadership . Helping others along the way .
the description is really great
u know this thing is webnovel makes me hate it like why would u need to have certain world count smh i don't like it if it's isn't a spam proof then what about all the spams
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I really enjoyed the story, since he's gaining followers he should give them the white karma and adopt them into his clan.So yeah so far so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????
I really have to say this novel hooked me in. I can’t wait to see the new updates
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It’s ok. I liked it at first, it was pretty average, but I still like reading it. There were a few errors here and there in the translation and it seems somethings were lost in translation. The story was going ok, and then the MC gets a super skill to be able to never be discovered no matter how strong someone was and to hide from fate, only for it to be used once and never again. It was completely pointless. The prophet went to divine his location, got backlash, within 10 ch, MC goes to another crevice and doesn’t bother using his skill (it basically makes him totally invisible, and as he gets stronger remove himself from people’s memories.) and gets his identity found out by everyone. MC is a total idiot. There’s like no world background
A very good book Yes yes .