I really like how you started the novel, with that 'old hag' can't imagine what our mc felt in that moment... grammar is excellent, didn't find any error, the reading flow is perfect too! i didn't have to stop to re-read some parts. Overall i recommend this novel :3
I'm giving up the previous trial reads coz I know they won't get picked anyway. But this, please pick it. It's the best among the new trial reads. The other were not that...you know.
If you are expecting this novel to be an otaku turned good looking. Who then starts to chase his dreams to become a kpop idol, while building a harem, its not. He goes to his first audition on chapter 41. for the first 40 chapters its a high school/slice of life/rom com. After chapter 41 it turns in to a slice of life/rom com, with more actual kpop stuff happening. The MC has a dream to have a harem but i think its just part of his mentality as an otaku, but the author is not going to give him that harem. So the MC just talks about it, but the harem wont happen. The author for what ever reason likes to make the MC brake the 4-rth wall and talk to the author. I don't really like it at all and i'm not the only one that does. But if you read this novel and also find the 4-rth wall braking annoying just do what i did and skip those parts and pretend they never existed to begin with. I'm not one to really like romantic comedy's or slice of life's since they are always slow paced and boring to me. But this one is not bad, i don't hate it, But its not my favorite. it is extremely slow paced in the beginning when it comes to the MC actually chasing his dreams and not just have it as a dream till many chapters later. The chapter lengths are allover the place. Some chapters are 3,000 words while others are 800 words.If you like Romantic comedies/ slice of life's with no harems then this is for you. but for me it was just, ok. Not my favorite, but not my least favorite.
Read the raws, it's great from Chapters 1 through 100, pretty good from Chapters 101 to 160, frustrating from Chapters 161 to 250, Chapters 251 to 300 were so bad I had to skim through them because of how the author started to rush the story (I was too invested and had to see how it all plays out), Chapters 301 to the end were trash because the author rushed the ending, made all the build up pointless, and scrapped the entire premise of the novel. So much wasted potential for both the story, characters, and system. The author littered the novel with racism and nationalism to an insane degree, made horrible character decisions, and ruined the novel. A waste of my time and braincells, I'm going to pretend everything past Chapter 160 never happened.
This is trash.The system is the only ok tier aspect of this novel.The author have no life experience or made no effort when writting this novel because everything sound childish, illogical or would be dangerous to do in real life.Other than those scene that wouldn't happen in real life there is only badly written faceslap scenes.
****! ? i forgot which chapter i reached in this novel when it was at gravitytales. can someone tell me the chapter where the MC just got back from his island which he uses for raising animals, i remember he was still in his yacht. it was near chapter 600 i think. help me please ?
Need more haven't hit the point of no return. Honestly i put this in a folder called oddities; read it while bored and a little stiff got hooked.
I really love your book please keep going this is one of the most interesting books i have ever read I create my own story's with Fubuki being the main character I'm happy you made her the 2nd main character it means alot to me
This novel is No doubts the best written translated CN novel out there , although there is cultivation it by no means make the MC a one man army .This novel focus more on the interactions between the MC and the Highly interesting and intriguing cast of characters , making it depends more on wit and cunning rather than brute force like most otger CN novels with a very nice and fitting world background. Please take in consideration that this is rather the slow paced novel since story starts out from MC child days .Overall this is a great novel and for those of you averse to the harem tag , Fear not the harem is extremely well implemented and nothing feels more natural nor it is forced with unrivalled beauties wanting the MCs babies left and right.
I REALLY enjoy the premise of this novel. An Ai human hybrid with basically no emotions attempts to complete his last programmed mission which is to save earth and return human civilization. After a 100 years of rebuilding a wormhole opens to a new and magical word filled with life. What I like is how the MC pursues his goals, the whole conflicting nature of returning humanity to its former glory by murdering most in the new world and brainwashing the survivors into believing in his utopian goal. Give the book a try if you like the idea of skynet going against magical gods, monsters and all kinds of their fanatic worshipers.
It's like Solo Leveling but Chinese and bad.Our protagonist is extremely overpowered, it's seriously over the top and his whole gimmick is having a system that gives him a bunch of perks in addition to his already broken brutish necromancer class but like any good CN hack writer, our author balances our epic Gary Stu protagonist by giving him an injured older sister (who isn't blood related because CN novel) as a weak point for enemies to exploit.Like seriously, the whole plot is rubbish and painful to read, it feels so forced, this reminds me of those old school cultivation novels with insufferable copy paste son of destiny protagonists, it's honestly pathetic.And of course, it goes without saying that the worldbuilding, characters, and powersystems in this novel are completely unoriginal and uninteresting in both concept and execution. The characters are especially just really badly written, the antagonists especially are so badly written I feel physical pain whenever they show up.The more I think about this novel, the less I care for it (I think most people would share this sentiment), I'm just impressed with my ability to get through all 20 chapters of this stupid trainwreck. Anything this novel had going for it initially (which isn't much in the first place) has been completely ruined by the abysmal story and characters. Even if the story and other aspects were bearable, this novel's almost comical lack of originality would ruin it anyway. This is not good. 0.25/5
I'm honestly confused more than anything. Would I be writing this review before reaching the late 800s chapters I would just give it 5 stars.Sometime in the 850s the whole writing flips. It honestly feels like we switched author, Rudy, the main character makes a total 180 in mindset, the writing style becomes totally weird. Which makes it honestly, hard for me to continue reading.Now I'm conflicted, I really want to keep reading, but my head hurts after 2 chapters and the 10 continuous chapters of smut don't help either.