A well-written story, An interesting romance!The story is of high quality; it flows wonderfully smooth. The grammar is on point. It describes the characters interestingly and the plot of the story is intriguing. So far it only has 7 chapters, and it definitely has got everything right. Well done!
Although its currently only a few chapters but the pace and plot revealed in these few chapters are captivating enough leaving us wanting more.
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I really love this story so please keep it up.!
You won't blame me, I hope, I went straight to chapter 60, I prefer the parts where there is action, but you will be happy to know that I was caught in the narration and that I found your story extremely creative!You don't deserve lower than 5 stars and continue like that until chapter 1000!
I’ m writing this review to say i was here before greatness. And wish it nothing but the best for the future ?
Chapter 20 killed my expectations of the novel. Early romance just makes me uncomfortable. A nuisance and liability to his safety and it's a hype kill for me. The kid fell in love with a stalker in 1 interaction and shes already as important to him as his family. Sigh.
I just gotten to know reading past the mother daughter killing. It made me feel frustrated. I thought you mean controlled by the knife or losing some kind of emotion don't know. but he somehow have feelings for Julie. Who wipe the floor with his sorry ass literally and he doesn't have any kind of emotion to this act actually he likes. not feeling somehow how we know he feel pain in his heart when he tries to escape after they figure out he is the killer and confront Julie I just can't continue Reading after I read this this kind of b******* no offence to the author but I'm really frustrated. you should use some kind of spaces to move the paragraphs because I'm using text to speech to listen to The story . And this is my first review on this site.
Ooh my gosh! I took all my time to read a book for the first time. Geez...this book is so lovely! I can't get enough of reading it and I'm impatiently waiting for more updates. Upload more chapters author!
Great novel, I have read till chapter 60 and it has been a wonderful experience. Other than minor grammatical errors (he/she),(his/her) this has been great for me. I sincerely hope that the author keeps up the good work and this novel gains more recognition.
The story is well written and well paced with an amazing main character. The author is really good at conveying characters emotions in the more action heavy and tension driven scenes.
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