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"Hmm, interesting." I look over at Jin. "Why as a Master did you sell your shop?"
"It seems that it is sealed, it must contain some kind of treasure inside." Indra thought as he tried to open it by pulling the chains.
Immediately recognising the voice, I can hardly help the grin that begins to creep onto my face. Turning around, the rotund body of the king's hand, Gordon, filled my view.
"Man, that was a long knock back there, this girl is not normal." Seth thought. Rebecca heard the loud crash and went to the dinner table and saw Seth lying in the table. "What happened to you?" said Rebecca with a smile. "A little girl who called you aunt saw me, then got angry then punched me.....how ol….." a hard punch went into Seth's groin which cause the table to broke in half. "Don't ever, ask a women's age!!!" Rebecca was in fury. "auntie? Is that you?" Said the cute little girl, "Oh, Elizabeth it's you! You have grown!" said Rebecca happily.
The old man was very stubborn and free minded. He would never inform anything about him beforehand. He likes to shock people with strange ideas and after his wedding, he left. This was mostly because of their fight and his refusal to marry Zhen Xiu.
Writing Quality: 5I’m not an native nor have I spoken English for a extremely long time so I can’t really judge a novel on it’s grammar and stuff. Didn’t notice any problems though so 5/5Stability of Updating: 4Well, I don’t have much to say about this. 7+ch/week like promised. Did have a minor issue a while ago but Author promised us it won’t happen again. So that’s why it’s a 4 instead of a 54/5Story Development: 5The speed is neither too slow or too fast. Spending just enough time in the targets’ world to not see it as a passing side story and really get connected with all the characters in that world, but also not too slow to the point where it get repetitive and boring. It hit the sweet spot right in between.Character Design: 5All the characters are well thought out. They aren’t just flat characters which can be described in one sentence, but feel more like normal humans with complex thoughts. **Personal opinion**(more like me just being a fan girl (but I’m a man so should it be fan man? Nahh doesn’t sound right. Fan boy that’s it))I really really reaaaaallyy love how the grandmother that took care of the MC was written. I actually felt tears welling up in my eyes. 5/5(+infinite for grandma)World Background: 5The world was well thought out, and so was the system. Don’t really have lots to say about World Background because I don’t know how to judge a story where the MC is constantly traveling to other worlds. Decided I couldn’t really penalize the overall score because of my inability to give a proper review, so yeah. 5/5Overall: 4.8Really happy I found this novel again. Really really happy. I mean it. Promise.
"The Exclusive! What a surprise!"
Near the border of the Central Marsh, Chang Xiuying stood at the high hill with her eyes closed as she inhaled the air. The fog made her somewhat small body ethereal. When a familiar warmth hit her face, she slowly opened her eyes to see the morning sun rising with a beautiful luster of orange and purplish-pink. Its light gave color to the village that seemed like a canvass.
[Decription: If the territorial expansion and upgrade was left to the host the system fear it will take an eternity therefore the system has taken the matter into its own hands to lead the host towards success.]
Shaya shook her head helplessly as she replied.
Looking at him walking down the street on the way to the inn he saw the fatty stall he was surrounded by guards the fatty spared no expense in the security fatties where extremely cautious not to make the same mistake twice he was selling another.
Over the course of two days, the rumor about Tangning keeping ghosts, slowly disappeared. The hype had been overshadowed by news of other celebrities.
