I read the first 11 chapters they’re good and full of slice of life and I like that, wholesome too which surprised me cause it’s a cultivation novel no need to explain further. So yeah for those who reading reviews before reading a novel then start reading it’s good ( at least for me ) hope author won’t drop this or go in an unlimited days hiatus.
The power system is not bad but it's got worse when it inherited all the stupidity of eastern cultivation novels eg discrimination of the weak yet powerful, stupid elders who picks sides and sect master who's just a face, weak sect deciples with overgrown egos. Stupid brothers the list goes on
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This is a great romance novel with deep and well-developed characters. The conversations delve into meaningful subjects, making it an interesting read. Thanks for the translation!
I HATE these live stream type novels. Most chapters are just reactions from the audience, we only get a few lines to show the development of the story.
Now that it's been a year I'm honestly quite sad that only 26 chapters has been written. Time flies when you're bored. Anyways I just wanted to say that I spent some money (I totally didn't cry) and bought grammarly premium and some apps along with a bunch of writing utensils which will greatly increase the quality of my work. Although the release rate is still quite low since I have a life to live and homework to burn, I still try and write when I have enough motivation (I've been banned from red bull because I'm in puberty and I can no longer fly) Special thanks to Tam123 And our MHA friend Deku for following me all the way to chapter 26 already. I'm really glad. Now that I'm back in London I just have to finish a quick chess tournament and I will start releasing again. Well, enough of this 140 character+ review and time to start writing!
The synopsis itself will arouse your curiosity making you want to read more. Great novel, keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for more chapters
the actual story seems like it may be good, but it seems like they had a terrible or lazy translator who made it seem terrible(switching genders, numbers being mixed up, that sort of thing)
This is one of my favpeite novels right now. It's really good. I don't kbow about anyone else but I haven't really seen something related to videos games this good in a while. Also Author are you ever going to continue Falling Cosmos?
Say hello to the one who...Hello!!Are we going to review this?Yes, we are!!Can we just give it 5-star and left?No!!But we just did...LOL!!
Read up till the latest chapter, have to say, I'm glad I didn't vote for this trash novel. The summary was pretty telling on what kind of novel this will be, and I was not wrong. There is no consistency in the author's writing. He writes himself into a corner, then break the wall behind him so that he isn't cornered. Plot is typical subpar revenge types, and from many of the chapter comments, seemed to be a patchwork of other novels too. Says there's no job restriction in equipment, items all appeared with job restrictions. Game only up for first day and MC already grabbed 3 or 4 "hidden" quest? Milk a skill for easy monies. Meet beauties. Meet cardboard "arrogant young master". Meet a good number of "elites". Get noticed by "elites". Assuming MC has been playing continuously because super nutrients, what about the "elites"? 1 day old game, already people claiming themselves "elites" lol. Already there's "established elite/legendary guild". Also, exp needed to level up is ridiculous, must take casual players months to even get to level 10. Losing a level every time you die is pretty stupid mechanic too, a level 99 dying would probably smash his helmet in rage. I also don't know how the author is gonna write out the revenge plot. If he's not going to be bothered with the traitor and just shoot to the top, then revenge plot without revenge? If he is, then what next? Befriend him again to f*ck his a*s hard? Or just be a giant d*ck to an "innocent" guy who haven't done what he was suppose to do? Anyways, typical revenge plot with sides of plagiarism. Inconsistent and flat story, bland characters with sides of ***ism. This author managed to speed up the decay of the story, mediocre novel overall.
it's decent I guess. If you're reading for fun or to pass time , you could try reading it