MichelleGloria7436
What to say except that it is a masterpiece ? Hmm .. well I do have something to say but it doesn't concern the story but the ranking of this novel. Why the he** is this novel not in the top 30 ? Is it because the story is slow paced or is it because the number of chapters released are not enough ? Seriously you should give it a try, the story is fantastic and the writing is the same. I wish it was more popular. .
If you hate romance and want a revenge story where the revenge is actually satisfying with high pace story telling like you will read the 500 chapters in one sit and not regret it there is slight repetition but not much deviation from the main story unlike most novals where the main character keeps going zig zag and pissing you off acting like a kid with ADHD the main character has 5 years and he makes sure he is using every minute possible of staying on that thought
It's not easy finding a good novel these days. It has good grammar and the flow of the story is also good, like hella good. Everything is reasonable that you can't really complain and make you want to read more. The issue of whether its harem or not... this is just my opinion, since I'm already quite attached to the well-made characters, I'm kinda hoping that it is a harem, I don't want this to be like a japanese anime where the freaking MC don't choose a girl. ANYWAY, 28 out of 10. lolP.S. Thanks for your hard work, and please work harder for more chapter (no pressure).
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Novel is good but thanks to translator, I'm not enjoying it. There is a lot of greek words. War God Avatar = Avatar of Ares, Qi=Mana etc... There is a lot of shet like this in this novel. It is irritiating to read.
i have being searching a little for the mix in the mc's students The world of HN1F is a mixture of the altered worlds of Battle Through the Heavens, Perfect World, Xian Ni, Transcending the Nine Heavens, another book and the author’s own creations. In this book, you will see characters based off of characters from these novels such as Xiao Yan, Shi Tian Hao (Shi Hao) and other such characters. The beginning of this novel should be treated as a sort of parody to these novels. Once the MC gathers his 4 disciples, the story will then start moving along it’s own plot line and this is when the story truly starts. You will still see some familiar events related to the characters except a bit altered, but the overall plot and story will be centered around the author’s own original plot
Really a meh story, since the system got upgraded the story has become a list. First of all the mc is not the mc ( since the start of the book the mc was interesting only in the first 40 chapter after that the mc only stays at home with literally no adventures) at first it was ok because we could still read the adventures of the "human tools" but after the system got upgraded we only have a list and no story or background example:human tool 1: stays in a cave for 20000 years and cultivates to soul formation then dies. reward for the mc one upgrade in cultivation.That's literally the story. like That's it you have no adventure no background explanation. no enemies you are just told that they stay in a cave cultivate for Thousands of years and the mc gets super rewarded.However cultivation levels stop making sense, the mc advances super fast and the author dosen't bother to explain what each level does, you are just told that the mc is super strong and every 2 chapters the name of his cultivation level changes but again you will never be explained what it does. so to you it's all the same.All in all it started good and ended in shi*
Welp, kinda like this since this is one of those chinese novels that are translated and not repetitive but actually something happens to the money or he gains some popularity.Wish fulfillment stories are kinda my thing and this suits my tastes.Not everyone would agree but some would, lol.Translation is good, Story development is "so-so" ?. I hate myself lmao.Story kinda fast pace and I like that but not everyone would like it because of the lack of details.Character Design makes me want to kill those girls lmao. They may be beautiful but at the face of money they become gold diggers, and those men are like a bunch of wolfs fighting for dominance to be the Alpha Wolf. Always showing off wealth and connections whenever they would.For the most part, I would've been okay with tolerating with that characters if it wasn't a huge stereotype on everyone in the novel. This is one thing I hate and love about Chinese novels the most.World Background is simple and understandable so 4 stars.Wow. Average rating as of rating this was 3.9 and now I'm giving a 3.8. Definitely not far off.
amazinggggg storyyyyyyy so might smas well you guys try the story worth ittrt!!!! lets keep hyping the storyyy to promote it to the readers!!!
I am writing this review only after 18 chapters, so it may change?. A warlord,who is getting humiliated from stage 1,? Even if it's in the name of lifesaving grace, there should be limits.. Also what's with the family constantly blocking his sword for their enemies ?. Just not my cup of tea. I had great expectations but this was frustrating . That's why I wrote this review ?.
Have some self respect, don't touch this novel, the only thing this novel does a good job at is being straightforwardly garbage.Our protagonist gets a ridiculously overpowered talent, it's straight up broken, there's no tension to be found anywhere. The antagonists hate the protagonist because he's doing well and for some reason (poor writing) they think he's only doing well because he's lucky.The protagonist and his allies on the other hand have no personality, the pencil shavings in my bin have more personality. The protagonist literally kills a man in front of 2 women and they just get over it instantly. The author is really self inserting hard here.Every attractive woman with a name in this novel is attracted to the protagonist because bad writing. The world building is copy pasted from something else because bad writing. The power system is nonsensical and also copy pasted from somewhere else because bad writing.Now even with all this I don't mind copy pasting stuff from other novels all that much, my real problem here is not the fact that these ideas are stolen but the fact that these ideas are garbage. 0/5.
thank you for reading guys so much. I appreciated. It means a lot. muwaahh
