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This book was truly amazing despite having only 2 chapters. The writing was so friendly that I could not help but say hi over and over again. I truly wish to see more chapters of this book.
Great story, the concept is original so no stereotypes. Character development is well done, writing style and spelling are not confusing. The concept and adaptability of Andrew to new situations imagined by the author are perfect. Do not roll your eyes! This is a really good story!
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This book is simply amazing, the story is very gripping and one chapter leads the other! I'm always waiting for the next one to come out. The story is really gripping and everything is really clear despite the very elaborate plot, characters introduction is really well made and doesn't take too much time so the reader is immidiately involved into the events. Really consistent characters who never do something against their real nature, and talking about the background you will surely notice how well made it is, there are many true mythical/historical references which make everything even better. Highly recommended, it will be well spent time.
All this person as basically done is go to the ben 10 Wikipedia and copy all the episodes plots for each chapter. A blatant copy of the original work.
The story is very good and it fills the Void the LoTPE has filled in my soul, however it is riddled with grammar errors and I sometimes have to re-read sentences to figure out what you are trying to tell me.Overall it is a good read though- Would be better if you fixed the grammar, or spent 10 more minutes on each chapter just to read it yourself and find errors that way,
You want me to read this up to chapter 20? The grammar is garbage, it is torture for anyone to read this. Get an editor or something and we'll see then.
this novel is fantastic, the MC is in my opinion Perfect. he knows what he wants and does what he has to do to get it. their power system is interesting. the story Is not too slow but it's also not too fast... am at chapter 60 and I have to say that so far its a solid 5/5 and I highly recommend it to anyone that reads this review... will update this when I catch up to the new stuff if there is a need to.. cya
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