Sang Pahlawan

writing quality could use some upgrades, for example the characters names have some typos to them. not only that but the grammars could use some help for example am -> I'm some sentences need to be rewritten again. the story development is good, i can't say more because it'll become spoilers for otherscharacter design is okthe updates hmmmm are not great but not terrible eitherworld background..... this is FGO the world is already complex as it isfyi i wrote this after I've read chap 11ps. Buggy pulled a fast one on me, can't believe he became one of the yonkos

I fucking love this story! Im not a pyscho, but the story just makes me want to laugh when it starts getting violent. Now, there is some unnecessary philosophical stuff and the author barely updates. It might just be me, but im always waiting for the story to update and it feels like forever when it does. SO, pLEAse AUThoR Update MoRe.?Besides that this story is the best story ive come across on this app.

I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.

I HATE these live stream type novels. Most chapters are just reactions from the audience, we only get a few lines to show the development of the story.

Best dual cultivation novel out there. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

At first it was interesting, mc having the highest cultivation level in his plane/realm all to know that he have no combat experience at all which sucks.The plot is boring with alot of flaws.