Very impressive beginning! What a perfect skill to bring the thrill to the audience. The character was well built, but the world building was restricted due to the nature of realistic novel. A great novel for who like novel with mystery element
This book is captivating from start to finish. The authors depiction of the attack is stellar. The chapters take you on a bit of a roller coaster ride. As things begin to calm, you can almost feel the ******* right around the corner. The authors usage of foreshadowing in chapter one really sets the town for the entire book. We see potential trouble at the gas station with the homeless man, but then the fight breaks up. In chapter two we see the epicenter of the story, at the same location. The twists and turns keep the reader guessing and quite honestly makes it difficult to stop reading. The author also does an excellent job of conveying emotion. The extremely strong bond between Connor and his bride is palpable. Lastly, the author develops Connors character to such an extent that I found myself actively wanting him to prevail. I would absolutely recommend this book. It’s easy to read and will touch your emotions if you let it.
well dropping it.MC has no personality that make him protagonist but a pathetic loser who don't even try. And the girl character is shown too needy.Fight scenes are so confusing and complex that you will find it hard to understand.
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First off, only 40 chapters inSecond, this seems to be heading to harem, but for the first 30 chapters I liked it and it did not have many signs of harem, please read some chapters before deciding not to read it because of this aspect since it may change down the roadAlso, it is free, no spirit stones requiredLastly, I like this work and highly encourage you to read the first 5 chapters to decide if this is a book you'd like, I guarantee that it's better than some of the other books webnovel is currently supporting.
Rather interesting novel but ... Elsa... I hate her, if she died it would've been so much better, explain to me why did she have to stay alive, the only reason she's alive is to put the trope of 'GOD LIKE TALENTED LITTLE GIRL'
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I am waiting your supports on my first book. I have many book ideas as well, However I will finish this long-winded project of mine. we have really likeable final. We have immersive story. Well, it consists of magic, cultivation, dao, science.Many of readers likes things from each other. how come all in one? well, I stayed by logic of course. Everything in this journey is answered. so there you go!Love you guys, Thanks for supportsHey, we have more than one MC, so female and male leads as well. dont get confused at the beginnig.I will not describe a lot the people whom is not important for story, because I DONT NEED FILLER CHAPTERS.. My story has huge concept enough. I will not explain the same things twice, but the novel will be long so if I did, just ignore and forgive me.Enjoy it!
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The Storyline is fascinating to an extent that grabs readers attention. Beautiful pictures are drawn through these words. Overall a good novel.
The writing quality is very poor, especially In the beginning, it gets better towards the end, but can still be hard to decipher what they are saying at times. The world building is pretty good and so are the characters. The only reason I kept reading till the end was because I found the concept interesting, especially the blessings, that was fun. The first thing that should be worked on is the writing quality, it is almost near impossible to understand what I am reading at some points and that needs to be worked on immediately. It was hard to understand what was happening when the mc and his dad first met. I still dont know why he cant be his dads son anymore. That whole part made no sense, also with the mind place with the island and ****. Still don't understand that because it was not explained properly and the writing quality didn't help. Also, the characters emotions and personality change dramatically at times. It's just a real mess to be honest. Cool concept, bad execution.