To be honest the premise of the novel sounds amazing and if the author would like to a similar sounding novel would be supreme magus bc it's got an mc with a dark past too. I like this novel with a real human being as mc I'm excited to see where this goes. Pre-novel report end?
I'm loving this novel Is truly a fun story but the update is killing me but whatever authors have a life too so I shouldn't get too greedy.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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The mtl is "The Eldest Martial Sister Gave Up Treatment".Note: I really like the story a lot, until I notice that I need to pay two keys to unlock the chapter. I don't mind supporting the translation of the novel I like, but two keys??? Seriously???
Well I like the story it just that there were many errors on translation department. Well I also don't understand the system functions. Oh and also the evolution path of the beast
"Authors' Bayotgraphy"From the clues I've picked up, the author is a filipino and is fluent in english.------The author also seems to be a teenager. The author watches too much anime.------The author knows KPOP. The authors' ideas are taken from his experiences and favorites.-------The author watches po**hub. The author wishes for ****** to happen. The author wants some MILF.----The author takes on his fantasies to his writings as he immediately eliminated the father to gain a harem from his own family. -----The author has a nee-chan for a mother while a tsundere type as the sister.
Well there aren't enough chapters to actually give constructive criticism but still the story seems interesting and a little new, will give a better review when there are more chapters.One advice though, try to improve character interactions their interactions don't feel that natural yet.For now adding it to my "to read in a month" list
So far the story is pretty good, and I hope author don't abandon this. ???????????????????????????????????????
I could not read more than a few chapters before getting a headache. Please have someone restructure your text . ???
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the only reason for the 4 stars is because the standard of webnovel has dropped down and reached the mud for they are not developing the writers nor giving them a screening process to post