I can hardly find any reincarnate stories as good as this. I could hardly make any errors. That alone was impressive but to be genuine the first chapter has to be..., u know what I mean to enable the readers to read more. I'm not criticizing but am just being genuine but apart from that everything seems to go nice and the pargraphs are put in order. I just love the top-notch vibe it's giving.
Good enough grammar. But please give some effort to making sure the paragraphs and conversations are formatted to be readable too.The novel description said the MC was a normal human with no power and got by with wits and determination. I was hopeful that this MC would not be another overpowered idiot.But then the MC was announced as the fiance of a queen in the third chapter which... is something else, haha...And then he defeats half a dozen knights effortlessly with a dual-wielding style he has never used before, analyzed the difference between wood and aluminum with a single glance from the bleachers of the fighting arena, and then later plans and executes a rescue operation without prior experrience, based apparently just on knowledge gleaned from TV and family stories, then goes on to defeat...well, you get the idea.Author...*cries*...your definition of 'powerless' is apparently very different from mine.I'm partial to isekai where the MC's power is just modern knowledge, but give some logical reason how the MC got that knowledge please. If any person can plan a hostage retrieval just from watching TV and listening to grandpa talk about the war years, then this reviewer hopes to learn the violin from watching lindsey sterling on youtube.The plot progression of this novel is great. There is always something to be interested in as the MC introduces the wonders of bombs to a medieval world based on magic.The growing relationships of the MC have some interest as well, though I think giving the MC actual friends rather than people he steamrolls over at the soonest opportunity would heighten interest in the world.The beginning chapters are a bit rough but the format and grammar gets better as the story progresses. Lots of action, good development.All in all, a good read. Good going author!
so he got transmigrated, found his job too hard, didn't bother to learn and manage it, pushed responsibility to his father then kept collecting the money, now he's slacking off in vr. there's harem tag too? I can already imagine the kind mc this is
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I have read 70 chapters and i do think tyis story has potential it was just written by sime one who sucks at the most basic parts of writing. If the author bothered to go back and correct his many obvious mistakes and stoped deleting peoples post because they leave a bad review then this could be on par with some great novels like world of worlocks. Some things he does wrong is:1. The way he writes makes me think English is is not his first language. Which is not the problem the problem is he writes so 1 dimensionaly , MC is an ideot that flip flops me then a fish out of water. Dies because of wrandom woman .Promises to live for himself no others. Transports to another world . Gains powers at a stupidly fast wrate .Bumps into wrandom whore gives out precious knouledge about fire for free. Now ***** is never mentioned again. 2. There is no structure he pretends to be careful but, he is as arigent as they come. Does not do basic reserch about brand new world. Ok about killing human for no reson after 1 command from the principal at a school. Should have 0 fighting experience but Does not matter cuz he 1 shot everyone. No one has escape ability despite the people he is fighting are hundreds of years old.3. Super easy to become a god he does not need to train meditate , explore , get good equipment. Demi god stronger then mid god him. His chess philosophy is super lame i liked his old powers better. 4. Gods who have lived hundreds and thousand of years are stupid like pre-pubeant ****. When he is on adventure because he is at mid god leven and arthur is only now how there is no one else in story to give an F about he ads more 1 dimensional mid god beings who tell u ****ty background ove campfire. Insted of being mysterious and all incompassing instead of acting like a lvl 10 adventure group. There are many problems this is just the tip of them i just hope Arthur fixs them so story can actually be good.
Hey, just a note for those of you who want to read. Please read carefully, so that you don't feel disappointed because your time is wasted reading this story. 1. Is this some kind of story with reincarnation or going back in time? No, this story is just about an ordinary guy who discovers that there is a game that can be used to make money.2. Does this story use something like a system? I don't know what kind of system you're expecting, I'm using things you can find in normal RPG games.3. What about the MCs? He's neither good nor bad, I'd like to write him as a realistic human, only doing things that benefit him, but at least he can still sympathize.4. Is there romance? Yes, and because I love it, there's probably a lot of romance in this story. And there will also be more than just the main couple to enjoy in this story. 5. Is there a Harem? No, although I actually like it too, but I don't use it because the setting of this story is still in the normal world. And also I don't want any female characters to get hurt because the MC can only be with one girl. (And to be honest, writing a good and balanced harem is hard.)6. About the plot, there might be some things that are a little strange or don't make sense. But remember that this is just a fantasy story, and it is also possible that you will find a lot of plot holes in this story. So just understand, and I will also try to improve more every time.7. Regarding writing, I admit that I am bad at writing things. Moreover, English is not my first language, and I am still learning it. So if there are errors in writing or grammar, you are free to give criticism or input. Whether you want to criticize bluntly or subtly, I will gladly accept it.8. And also for each chapter, it will contain an average of between 1.300 to 2.000 words.Warm regards,Alkapa
I needed to read a wish fulfillment novel to take a bad taste from a previous novel that I just read. I didn't expect a decent plot and some comedy as well...this novel only has a few chapters but so far I'm enjoying it.
Loved it! Would love to lose my memory just to read it again. I think of writing a fanfic about this story and hope you're okay with that.Stupid character limit...Son GokuVegetaBulmaTrunksGotenGohanI think thats enough characters. See ya!
Tho I see some space for improving, This story never fails to give you the feeling of comfort, and the bitter truth of life. Each chapter ends with a hope, and that makes it all more better.
Beautifully written, can feel the emotions every character is being through, love the way characters are being portrayed.Dark, intriguing and emotional story.(Strong female lead) ?
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