ELDERLICH01
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hello. This is my first post and I have just finished caching up with your wonderful story. I found your story as an audiobook on "Zephyr Odin Audiobook (Reborn)" YouTube and had to continue it. I hope you continue to stay active and post updates for your story.
Hello, I found this book while scrolling through the apocalypse section and since the synopsis sound amazing (blind Mc how exciting) and there's a bunch of good reviews, I thought I would give this a try. I'll come back with another review after I finish reading!
This is actually good! I like how the system is having mood swings from time to time, it's funny and its interactions with Raven are hilarious. And I like Raven's personality!
The premise is quite good but its been executed really poorly by the author.The translation quality is also bad which makes it a totally uninteresting read, when u r reading a chapter about for eg a fight atleast you need some details about both party’s streng some description about their background etc but there is nothing present in this novel the mc goes to fight unleashes his creatures speakes a simple dialogue and everything is over in a single chapter.So don’t waste your time on this.
This is a sequel and introduces the Guns and Gore gaming world. It's a smart and funny continuation of TAP. Many of the old characters are revisited and the author does a great job of seamlessly introducing new ones. QJ isn't as OP or physically gifted as his dad, he possesses a superior intellect that he uses to overcome the obstacles in his path.
The story is good and keep the good work for more interesting upcoming chapters, maybe slowdown a bit the progress of the MC it's kinda fast forward atlest put some small dialog in between.
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So far, I have greatly been enjoying this novel. The characters aren't your typical "smart" mc's that do the dumbest crap possible. Instead, they actually plan ahead and consider what they're doing. Any mistakes they make are usually because they are still immature children, or because of their limited worldview. They aren't arrogant, as they know there are likely people with more talent than them, while also not being overly humble, as they still easily destroy opponents when necessary. Their advantage in combat makes sense, since who the hell would be expecting a human to fight like a beast?My one singular gripe is that the worldbuilding seems kind of basic, and a lot of stuff that is introduced is just kind of abandoned, with no later mention.Asides from that, five stars in everything, I would absolutely recommend this to anyone trying to read a good Wuxia novel, then I'd solidly recommend this one.
First of all, it sucks that you didn't explain the world more, although yes you explained about the hiearchy system and thats it! You didn't even explain in detail if there is magic or simalr thing! There is a 'identification stone' and the first thing I thought I you would do is make MC learn about this kind of stuff better and the world he got in better but no you write many chapters with MC having s** like wtf dude the title is even culinary but the first thing you focused on is MC and his love interests being intimate not cooking not food and not searching for more information and the MC is an idiot - its okay to tell about business strategies and law and policies to the baron, his father but production of new products, the f*** you should just have the MC make a new company (although the territory is having a crisis roght now they are still a baron they must have savings and such also there is the thing called an investment), this will make the MC and his family prosper more, remeber that the territory is not entirely their own but the kingdom they are in.... If they have a family company they will not just make the family prosper but also the economy of the territory, it will become the specialty of the territory more visitors more people more money and more merchant will invest in the territory for potential and competition.... Also is it quite a norm for MC to check their status first or this MC is just a UNIQUE DUMBA** and the author H****!!! Im excited at first because there is a gourmet novel again for me to read but its just a SE* novel at most in the chapters until now BTW there is another novel using the same character name as this MC with the same type of novel which is gourmet (lol I don't know if this is gourmet because the first 21 chapters but cooking dishes is not even properly mentioned or it is nit ipmentioned even), hope you will improve and also I advise you that upyou get an editor if ever you pursue this nove!!!!!
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Love the saviness of the MC rather than just butting heads with the other MC he acts from behind the scenes. Thumbs up ? ?????????????????
