I CAN HARDLY READ IT BECOZ OF THE TERRIBLE ENGLISH. PLS CAN YOU FIX IT.
I personally like the story. Who doesn’t love gender-bender with male becoming female and getting love interest from male counterpart.
No OP-much MC, just a steady progressive strengthening for beloved MC which author can definitely lengthen the story while not making it too shabby or boringly.
love this book, the writing quality is good with a few minor mistakes (missing letter etc). Story development is enjoyable the mc isn't someone who will stay low just to live a peaceful live on the contrary he has big ambitions. The updating stability is stable with nothing to complain about.
10/10 so far
Love the story so far.Love the story so far.Love the story so far.Love the story so far.Love the story so far.Love the story so far.Love the story so far.Love the story so far. Sorry about that had to be more than 140 carcaters.
this is not really a review but its something that will improve ur writing if u want to use it but add a little more background information to make the sence more interesting and fun to read that goes for the characters to the girl she does not have a good disruption of her to much u cant clearly see her too much it's very faint but all in all it's a very good story to begin with I do suggest to add on to the story on the next chapters ^¥^ :)
Beautiful book!! Short chapters yet so good. Thriller and romance together is really rare and I lovee this!!!!!!!!!!!! Toooo goood to beeeee truee
I was really getting into this story but the author said he was going to do a mass release that was 5 months ago other then that he did a great job sticking to the mc idea and creating a world
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping the lengths of your chapters from 1k-2k words each due to that being what's most liked on this site, though the story isn't lacking in my mind, I feel that the first 5 chapters are likely a bit on the short side. Also, for the last two chapters you have gaps of time that you did not explain to us that you would have ahead of time, this will reduce your score in stability of updates, I suggest you try to keep updates more regular, or to let us know what we should expect as far as when new updates will occur.
Positive feedback: You had stable updates for all but the last two chapters, and you did well in all other arias of this novel... keep up the good work.;,;.
Personal Feedback: I will continue to read this novel at a later date.;,;.
Score: WQ&SoU 4/5 SD,CD,&WB 5/5
I wanted to like it, but people are so fragile, Mc punches, stabs people directly to cripple their cultivation. also the beginning Is so long winded, hey trash, what you have cultivation? Mc cripples them who is trash now, over and over again after he crippled and killed so many people, it'd gets old, I was in seclusion training so I here I come to be cannon fodder for mc.
Honestly I'm a reader that's not overly picky. everyone is complaining about how dumb the mc is but I don't mind. In fact, I rather enjoyed this novel a lot. well enough to get me to a bit over 550 chapters. But the story decisions made at this point are very frustrating to the point that I no longer want to read it. It's not that it's bad but 550 chapters in I'm invested in the mc. the REAL mc. It's not that what you did isn't an interesting idea it's just an extreme let down because it took way too long and lets us get too attached to the real him. if you were gonna do something like that don't give us so much IRL in it. it honestly doesn't even feel like the same story.
Yeah like they are in a demon world and yes it is dark novel which it should be. Overall a great read! Nothing mayor to complain about. Maybe one problem it has it just doesnt have enough chapter.
Well above average Bleach fic. My main issue is that even for a fic, the growth of certain supporting characters power is a bridge too far, putting them on par with Captains. Otherwise, the writing is good, even though it uses that weird 'Name: Talks' format that for some reason dominates here. With text to speech, it's an annoyance just below infinite dashes? Pace felt slow but that might be me wishing the retelling of canon parts would go by faster, though I admit it's probably useful for those unfamiliar with the source material due to passing time or never having watched/read it. No idea on updates at this point as I'm way behind.