DragonsRulez

Mc is all over the place. World background is ok but the backstory could be left out and it would still be the same. Mc was given a subordinate system and then spent 4 months doing nothing while his competitors where training their ass’s off and yet he seems to come out on top.Just not my cup of tea when it comes to novels i would prefer a bit more logic.

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just the first sentence, knocked me off of my seat. this is new, a good new, a beautiful new, and I love it???????? definitely awesome. I humbly await your new uploads.