Do you want to read a System Story?Do you want to read a story with an MC?Then, you came into the right place, this story has both a system and an MC! Alexa play anime weeb music.
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WRITING QUALITY:-A commen phenomenon with Original Authors sadly is poor writing quality, however this guy is an execption. The use of punctuation, paragraphs of reasonable length meaning not too long or short, and overall a readable flow which is what we readers expect. Why shouldnt we if were investing our time into a story? A story that will take us on a rollar coaster of emotions. 5/5STABILITY OF UPDATES:Since Ive binged this novel up to current chapter... I don;t have a full pciture to comment on. What I do appreciate though is a novel past 200 chapters still going strong. Several OAs ive been reading have fallen of the wagon out of knowhere sadly. Thankfully this guy is not one of them (fingers crossed) 5/5STORY DEVELOPMENT:The Story mentions that there current world is just small part of a ever larger universe. This is to be assumed and people at this point shouldn't be suprised. Putting that aside we have enough story to understand the situation while leaving some mystery which I feel is necessary. Also the author has put a timetable out for the MC to reach a certain cultivation level so it wont be dragged on in ths same place. Enough Urgency to move everything forward 5/5CHARACTER DESIGN:This is by far one of my favirote novels in this regard. Iv'e read enough old authors and new original authors to see well done characters.MC - Man who started off on the extreme side of benevolence only to get betrayed. So one can expect him to pendlum swing the other way, however he dosen't stay there long after his first 2 women heal some of his emotional wounds and give him some faith in humans again. With his companion Luna also forcing him to face some of his repeating traumatic patterns that do more harm then good to those around him and more importantly himself. Great stuff. 5/5Harem Members - The 1st one has been shown to have a rough history while manging to keep her optimistic view on life in contrast to the MC (I know he was dealth a worse hands, but I still think this point has merit). Her power is strong enough to stick with the MC for the long run. Good Stuff. Dont need a weak lover in the cultivation world2nd women while some may view her as too agreeable with the MC I like her overall. Growing up alone with no connection.. to finding the MC and not wanting to let go developing a possesive attitude border line Yandere.. to slowley understanding the way people interact all makes sense. Is it emotionally healthy? No, but how could it be given the world and her experiences.Others:Several potentail allies have been shown. Too early to say if they'll stick with the MC or not given the current plot. Still well thoughout charcters from the looks of it so far.WORLD BACKGROUND:This novel despite being over 250+ chapters in is still very mysterious. Multiple demensions if you zoom out to the max. While the current land mass may or may not be the only one. I wanted to give this a 4/5, however I understand its still too early to know such information so I'll give it a 5/5 in hopes clarity will happen soon. OVERALL:Worth the read. Truly. Cultviation stucture is easy to understand, charcters have depth and are develpoing. Story is progressing at a resonable pace. 5/5
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This is actually a good premise, but the execution is just horrible. Either the translator skipped paragraphs, or the author doesn't feel the need to explain or plan anything properly.Examples:-MC transfers 1-3 days of cultivation every day, despite receiving multiple days of cultivation each time. We could say he cannot transfer the cultivation given by the system, but that means he can only transfer 1 day since technically he gave away the previous day's cultivation. - Pick a hard technique because the longer it takes to cultivate the better. Huh? Why?- Since he only gives the pet 1-3 days of cultivation at a time, it should be impossible for his pet to keep up with him, since he gets much more in return. Yet, their levels are synced. - MC reaches bottleneck and needs combat to breakthrough. How much combat? 1 fight...All interactions in the school are just 1 badly done cliché after another. So monotonous and uninspiring that you might as well just skip it. I wish another author copied this theme and did a good job with it.
Very unlikeable face-slapping story with generic lecherous MC. There’s a ton of chapters that are completely filler. If you like this type of novel it’s better you do something that is better in life.
The start was good until the part where he transported to the future. But things started to go downhill when he met this girl who is a CEO of his company... she was part of the one who humiliated him, throw him out of the company and did everything that could hurt his pride. It's really not something I could stand for.
why tf is it always the worst book thats picked????? Do you guys not see how unique the "My master always breaks through at the verge of death" or "I help an npc novel is???
This is one of the best original novel out there. It has a good story that is engaging, the MC and the FMC's have their own personality and are fleshed out well and are not shallow, the chapter update are somewhat constant, the writing quality and grammar of this novel is one of the most better quality for those writing an original novel, the WORLD BUILDING ~ well there's only a little bit of world building since it's a slice of life story.My only complain of this novel is it's pacing, more specifically; the time progress. It is too slow, I have read up to chapter 130+ but only more than a month have passed in the story and in this time, many events had happened.But overall it is still a good novel
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.Alternative Names:• Laughing in the Wind• State of Divinity• The Peerless Gallant Errant• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu• 笑傲江湖Translators:• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)• HHaung (Chapter 21)• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)Editor:• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this
AUTHOR PLEASE RESPOND BECAUSE I NEED TO KNOW-Have you dropped the book or it the upload schedule just really slow because I want to binge read it so I wait for more chapters but there are only a very small amount of chapters released each month.
honestly it was one of best in starting bcoz of its unique mc with good humour , being logical , no simpness and dark type mc above that who really understands importance of k owledge . It was honestly good novel in starting but gstarted going downhill like many ither chinese novel bcoz of many same reason as others like illogical crap , firced wrting , forced situations to make mc hype more ,and then that forced romance shit honestly .from the the moment romance shit i mean Fmc was introduced he stopped being the mche was in starting . became a total simp . and many things started get illogical honestly . many things are forced justifyied also . It us a story for ppl who foolow blindly any shit aithors put , and any shit mc does. and yeah those Ship lover also will like this crap .