Is this story made by a single author? It's more like there's a couple of authors here, taking turns doing each paragraph - with only the vaguest knowledge of what each other is doing. This means there's going to be a beauty introduced every chapter. The protagonist's parents are going to be alive the next, and supposed dead for 3 years the next chapter. Oh, his sibling also regularly changes gender and names. This batch of trial-read has been...utterly terrible.