Good Job boss.. patuloy lang!!...................................................,..........................................................
This limit thing is dumb, really makes spam be the more likely approach, anyway.The writing in itself is not bad, didn't see many mistakes if any, the rest is the problem, relationships turn from 0 to 100 real fast, a few hours change everything, didn't help to give depth to characters or make said relationships compelling.The Story is somewhat awkward, the development until the point I read didn't appeal to me and was kind of beaten down by how poorly I felt the relationships developed.The characters seem one dimensional, without depth and completely passive to the world around them, "Oh okay I accept being the support of thirty different people in a setting with real danger and with little to no real benefit besides getting a fiance that fell in love with me at first sight." c'mon, I know how plagued by such things the Isekai genre is, but generally, the typical protagonist is not given a choice he's just suddenly in another world and is screwed, this one made a choice, for me it was the wrong one.Finally, the world or worlds were simply not described, left entirely to the imagination of the reader, it'll already be a challenge in and of itself to make dozens of legitimately compelling worlds, not even bothering to describe them will not help.This story is clearly being written by a beginner author, so let me give a little advice, plan a little ahead, give time to your characters to develop themselves and their relationships, and invest in the world you are creating if you want people to like your story. You don't need to describe the texture of the pebble by the side of the road, but what I'd like to know is, how is the school, how do the characters look, do they have a uniform, does the clairvoyant old man have a huge beard, does the bro-con princess have amber eyes?
I really love this. Please continue to make more chaptersssss. I will always give my powerstone to this story. So please . Thanks . Goodluck . Fighting
I sacrifice my brain cell for you guys.Force Plot...Mc have Zero character development. Also Mc suddenly became OP then typical Shxthe said he wanted to be low key 10 chapters later he offended the most powerfull clan in the town .
I've only read the beginning of the story and I am captivated. The story's beginning is unique with a sense of mystery. The main character is full of energy and loves to explore and seek entertainment. Hopefully, the story will continue to be great :D
story is kind of bland at the moment man makes no personal connection feels as if everyone in his family died in front of him he would only get mad because it's an insult towards him not cause he cared for those who died that coupled with the utter lack of any emotion being portrayed makes it seem as if I'm reading a list of groceries not a story focused on portraying ones experiences after all he doesn't even care about his maid that has been with him for years and just took her getting hurt as an insult without any real concern for her suffering all things together don't make a good OPMC because those stories heavily rely on emotion to keep readers interested and around after all we have a ship with a girl and we want to see the MC get her and how it happens yet every girl to him is a sack of bones not a possible companionLeave me feeling like something is missing don't like it very much
People reviews make no sense and it makes me doubt if they even read this novel. This is very similar to Tensei Slime Isekai. Just a flame instead of a Slime. If you like fast-paced novels read this.But people are ridiculous expecting a lot from only 40 chapters! You shouldn't judge when it's still the first arc! Unless It's a very trashy novel then I get it. But this one isn't that bad. MC is reincarnated in a very primitive world and he's decisive to kill to try to maintain some balance.
Really really good. I enjoyed every second of reading. At the start there is a lot of the skill updates but after a while they really tone down so don't let those turn you off from this novel. Give it a chance why don't you!
I have not read the novel. Just sharing one of my views about novels on webnovel (I do have experience of reading on webnovel for some years now).For me, it's now nearly an 'almost' established fact (at least for me) that the more chapters in a novel the worse (or at least boring) it will going to end up.
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This premise is stupid, even if you ignore the fact that this is a wish fulfilment novel, the power levels, and the harem et all, a lot of us don't care much about that stuff after all. But the fact that this novel is all of that YET the MC is a dog from some federation while he can overpower said federation is ridiculous.-