undertale: path of renewal

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Kudos to the author, almost as if i watching a movie like LORDS OF THE RING, you should be proud of yourself because you did a good job. Thanks for sharing your excellent work with us.

This novel is just wonderful.Despite the need for improvement in the writing and its structure, the story is still enjoyable.The moment I started reading the first chapter, I instantly remembered novels about self-discovery, like “The Alchemist” for example, and truly this did not disappoint.It’s clear. It’s precise. It knows what it wants to tell you and does exactly that.Great work! ?

[She's gotten stronger!]

I see, so that's the case. She wasn't wrong though. If I would gain information from her, I really would indeed trust Echidna more. However, I've had enough of her "too calm" face. She doesn't understand the situation. She doesn't understand my situation. Thus, I must do the trials to save the Sanctuary, and everyone outside.