It's another weak to powerful Pet novel. I thought the cheat system would be cool since it's basically a trainer, but it instantly gets nerfed into a generic system. It's not super interesting.
I will follow this author anywhere, though there's not much to say about this story as it's only 3 chapters in. however I just hope he completes this one and stops teasing
Exactly a copy cat of Era of Castles: Starting with 99 Dragon Eggs.
I don't know what the WN's thinking. They should check their works. It's pretty annoying.
Hey, just a note for those of you who want to read. Please read carefully, so that you don't feel disappointed because your time is wasted reading this story.
1. Is this some kind of story with reincarnation or going back in time? No, this story is just about an ordinary guy who discovers that there is a game that can be used to make money.
2. Does this story use something like a system? I don't know what kind of system you're expecting, I'm using things you can find in normal RPG games.
3. What about the MCs? He's neither good nor bad, I'd like to write him as a realistic human, only doing things that benefit him, but at least he can still sympathize.
4. Is there romance? Yes, and because I love it, there's probably a lot of romance in this story. And there will also be more than just the main couple to enjoy in this story.
5. Is there a Harem? No, although I actually like it too, but I don't use it because the setting of this story is still in the normal world. And also I don't want any female characters to get hurt because the MC can only be with one girl. (And to be honest, writing a good and balanced harem is hard.)
6. About the plot, there might be some things that are a little strange or don't make sense. But remember that this is just a fantasy story, and it is also possible that you will find a lot of plot holes in this story. So just understand, and I will also try to improve more every time.
7. Regarding writing, I admit that I am bad at writing things. Moreover, English is not my first language, and I am still learning it. So if there are errors in writing or grammar, you are free to give criticism or input. Whether you want to criticize bluntly or subtly, I will gladly accept it.
8. And also for each chapter, it will contain an average of between 1.300 to 2.000 words.
Warm regards,
Alkapa
A really well done story so far!
The descriptions are vivid and flow well together with the main text, the characters are interesting and believable, and the storyline keeps me wanting to turn the chapter to read more.
The prose is finely woven, and this is a read definitely worth checking out!
Good luck and keep up the good work.
I dont know why this is famous, there's so many unnecessary intro. Learning magic while forgetting things? Not allowed to know and stuff? Please, those are nothing but fillers for the story. You could've just went on the story for the new world. This is like eating the food but playing with it first but in an irritating way.
Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure
None human MC with evolution as long as he doesn ’t become a wife collector this should be a fun ride
After reading this for a while, I can now clearly see that the author gives the story's development some serious consideration.As the desert did to this island, I predict that they will travel to another island that connects to it next.I enjoy the characters. The main character is a good-natured idiot who can also be taken seriously, and I laughed when he turned into a girl. It would be strange if he continued to be a girl, so I just hope that won't be the case.Other than that, I adore creating new worlds and discovering new secrets.
Nice read • Steady world development• No nonsense / no poorly written situation / forced development The genre is a bit similar to The Empress' Gigolo.
I liked the old version but this new version is total banger, author totally improved this new version by several level! Totally craving for more chapter since looking at how the interaction so far plus how much personality the character have now, totally looking forward to some of his harem member changes!
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