Ketsueki_Hasu
you can read it on mtlnovel "protect our patriarch"?????????????????????????????????????????????
Best trial read for this week. There are no obvious flaws that I can pick out in this novel. Although the idea is nothing new the execution is pretty good. No obvious plot holes, the MC is not brain dead or arrogant. The story progression is fine aswell. All for all I’d say while it’s no where close to being the best novel I’ve read, it’s a decent read to pass time.
Your book only has a few chapters but after reading them i could tell your story has a lot of potential, the background is great and your writing is good and very simple which makes it quite easy to understand and i cannot wait to see the adventures they go on and i will be looking forward for more updates, hurry and give a chap author, good wrk.
This novel is a great find.I like it by far very much.Interactions btw Rovenin and mc is the highlight and cahill,nox are so cute.Please upload more chap.It takes some time but after you get into the story,it is great.ps:added to the library
It's my story and I love it ?❤ But in all honesty I'm so sad I have such a short time to finish this story. If I had more time I would feel at ease but I'm just grateful for the views this story is already receiving ??I hope going forward everyone will continue to enjoy it❤
Really really good start. First chapter had me on the edge of my seat to figure out what was going on on that bus! Although it was only a nightmare, it’s still a great introduction to the horror aspect, and the true feeling of loneliness that the MC experienced, desperately trying to get ahold of anyone. Loved it so far! I’ll read more when chapters release
I can tell that you made an effort making an uncommon world background! It was fun and little unique. Hope you continues to produce this with the same quality. Good job!
The story itself is pretty nice but the translation after the first 60 chapters is absolutely atrocious. Sentences that don't make any sense together with wrong his/her etc everywhere.
Welcome to Chi-Cheng company chinese child labor simulator the novel, trash parents who abandon their kids check, an mc who acts extremely nothing like his age and yet somehow everyone thinks it's normal check, chinese commoners looking down on you check, people gratifying him literally working and being on his own the entire time with no regard to his family being nowhere to be seen and the fact hes literally an elementary kid cooking over the fire and handling knifes with his tiny hands check. What more can you ask for from chinese society?
It's a good novel, the story is very interesting, but I feel that even though it's a double cultivation novel, it has a lot of lemons, so much so that it makes the plot stand a little still, I think that even in this type of novel there must be a consensus between the plot progression and the lemons
roses are red
violets are blue
I love this novel
so will you !!!!!!!
it started slowly but as I kept on reading it on w.u.x I fell in love with it, so here I am
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