It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward.
The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use.
To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste.
The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is.
If you want a light non complex dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.
Lets just say, the raws are much more different than this version as it seems like Webnovel decided to mesh up the story while removing details + adding more content or rather filler chapters that weren’t included in the original raws…
I have read some chapters, and this story is great, the mc and the idea is just perfect. Keep going because this book has potential I do have some suggestions, since there is some flaws.
I am so excited!! I have been following FLBF since the start and i love Nan Hua. Keep Going Sora!!!
Obligatory Author Review. We are all familiar with the beast taming genre: choose your preferred pet, train them, find the legendary resources to level them up faster and reach the top. But what if you were the very first to have that power? What if nobody knew the training methods, necessary resources or even which monsters could bring out potential of the Beast Master?That is the situation that our MC Karl has found himself in. I do hope that you all enjoy the story.
Solid story, a dungeon delve that seems like it will go on for awhile. Excited for how the class system might work.
I thought this was one of those blood pumping, face slapping cliche stories.This is really retirement novel.Love the story author. A promising novel.
there's nothing great about this book. it's made of nothing but faceslapping, permanent misunderstanding, and more faceslapping that takes more than 10 chapters.Though its readable, it's not fun or exhilarating enough for you to want more. It's just frustrating Bs faceslapping this family faceslap that family, etc.the Mc is well ? dull, old fashioned in a modern world, antagonists are brain dead all of them. it's just an semi-average book at best.
I loved it every single bit of it ?? it was a fun and adventurous FF
ngl best novel i've real in a long time.
MC sticks to what he says, not a beta male. Ruthless MC, caring to CLOSE CLOSE people. MOST IMPORTANT THING: HATES HAREM AND IS LOYAL TO 1 GIRL
It's nice, though it's still two chapters but i am super looking forward to what will happen next kyahhhh
keep up the good work my co-writer
Aye! The premise is interesting hehe! :D
I enjoyed reading a story about a sword that was trying to reach a higher level hehe!
Writing-wise, it's nice, grammar and punctuation are great :D
I also loved the world-building hehe! It was pretty detailed, and I could see that the author had put a lot of thought into ittt
Great job, author! <3