Another good novel ruined by trash translator again.
If the translator didn’t edit many parts and tried to westernized with no knowledge, the story will be the most interesting one of this year.
Please remove the translator, Webnovel. If you use this person again, more good work will be ruined by this person again and again.
This story has a writing quality I have seen only in The Legendary Mechanic. The depth of the universe and its lore is fleshed out so well but in an extremely natural way. The characters feel realistic and the way the author writes conversations is amazing. The emotions of the main character and the way he acts is logical yet affected by emotion in a way that feels so real. This book is amazing and I'll vote it up whenever I got stones!
this story grabbed me and kept me entertained from the first chapter. if the author gets published I will be buying their novels.
Horrible Grammar though readable, so 2 stars
stability of updates 4 points
story: sounds actually quite interesting but its the generic revenge storyv 4 stars for potential
character design: nothing special might get better later on but for now 3 stars
world background: i don't know.i've only read to chapter 5 before i could'nt take the grammar anymore so I'm assuming it's average. 3 stars
i have no idea how somebody could give this 5 stars. I gave it 3.2 stars and thats me being generous. The grammar alone would make 5 stars impossible, the weird analogies make it even harder "the clans hid, like a snake hides its legs".
Simply awesome!
You only make 6 chapters but the battle is already so awesome
I can imagine if this light novel converted into manga, it will easily surpass many chinese wuxia manga
This light novel is strongly recommended for anyone who likes manga, after seeing this you might wish that there is manga version of this!
something you should know before reading this novel:1. Why is there even a romance tag? 2. Mc is weak... Yes you heard it right weak, no jokes here3. Why he behaves so timid? Ewww I hate this kind of mc 4. Is that even a system? From my point of view system is a type of cheat that makes you op in a very short amount of time, he only reached the 9th level of the first realm in over 10 years. Can you even call it a cheat?5. No motivation6. Why is it seems like he doesn't have any intelligence? 7. Boring concept (always the same)8. Irritating beta behaviour of mc 9. No world-building10. Ahh, as usual, not even trying to explain the characters' looks... Sword-like eyes?
this seems like this book would be an interesting read
it has only just started and I'm still waiting for the story to actually begin but the intro has been fun
I ❤️ OP as it can be a fun concept if done right.
absolutely awful. the plot is inconsistent and the character are bland and generally awful cliches. MC is worshipped right off the bat and is OP without doing anything, and his personality is super annoying.
this novel doesnt deserve a high power ranking or rating.
great book, it has a wonderful story
The plot of having a vampire in a sci world is brilliant. wondering what else can this book show us, where can it take us!
The character building and the writing plot are easy flowing.
keep it up, author
Story was good. really good with world devolopment. But MC'S adopted mother opted to who*e(gangb*nged) herself out, for a reason. Author just put this scene casually. D*ckhead author should have put warning in synopsis if he was gonna put this type of with discription,since lot of people are sensitive with this type of scene.
should not be suprising if author put hardcore Netor*re casually with discription.
I hope this comment stays,not get deleted.
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awesome .