It's not really my style but it's catchy. I think you make it easy and smooth to read. I love the MC ? and his obsession, it reminds me of someone. I actually feel closer to him. Good work ?, I hope to be able to read everything soon.
MC spends most of his time obsessively building a harem for the protagonist. Its been almost a hundred chapters of this and looks like it might go a hundred more. Writing quality is good and the world is really interesting but the harem for someone else thing drags on to long.
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I would give it all 5s but there are some grammar mistakes and some poorly written sentences but very far in between.I'm 60 pgs in and I'm wondering how this novel is not more well-known. very well done so far. It is a slow read when compared to other web novels, but I have enjoyed each chapter.if you want to read a story of the coming of age of a prodigy and his real struggles as he tries to make the world a better place, take a read.
I have been reading this novel for a while now , I really really liked it although its simplicity I had lots of fun reading it , I also liked how the author putting lots of his effort in making such respectful plot , Even the characters he give every character its own role in the plot , Even the fight sequence is great you will have fun reading them , and I loved the dark and psychological part of this novel , how the characters interact with each other you will find it very special with amazing sense of mystery in it , I believe that this novel will be something one day because the author puts a lot of effort in it.
The mc starts of strong, pragmatic and grounded. Then he gets a fairy guide and turns into a weak, scatterbrained moron.//////////////////////////////////////////
This is a story that is not one. The author is only rewriting Douluo Dalu and adding a few sentences like: "MC looks on with a smile on his face". The biggest tale that there is a problem with this is that you could replace the MC with an object and you would have the same things happening. The problem is that the author wants his character to be with Tang San and co and doesn't want to change the story but doesn't make it so that his character has a story.As an example, during the Shrek academy arc, the teachers teach nothing to the MC because he is OP and doesn't need help with cultivation, but they could have set up a regiment to make him gain true experience by sending him on some adventures. What I meant by all of that is that the author doesn't make a story parallel to canon so that his character can live in the douluo world, he is only witnessing and doing nothing.That's the negative of this story, and since I don't like being negative about things I will talk about the positives.In terms of story updates, the author is constant and the quality doesn't fall.The writing is good and it is easily readable and aside from the common mistakes, like quiet (volume down) that becomes quite (quantity), you will not find anything to complain about reading this.
It's good but not to the point where you get hooked up. This novel is a cliche that in webnovels, different kinds of titles but almost the same content are popping up.
All hail the lord... KHAOS itself. The very first chapter catches the mind of the reader. If you like books with non-human mc then you should definitely give it a try, and if you like system novel though it's not your stereotype ones... it's a good choice to give a try.Good luck Khaos for the book.
Look here guys... I like this novel okay? This is totally my type of fantasy, but whether I like it or not, it doesn't matter.What does matter however is, MALCOLM IS THE BEST GUY!
The story is pretty flat, no detailed descriptions or any decent world building, apart from the names of villages and towns. The premise sounds intriguing at first, but it’s not. Mc is trapped for “mysterious reasons” (that’s literally the novels explanation) for a thousand years but then no time passed at all, it just makes no sense. To anyone interested in a premise similar to this, but much better executed, I’d recommend “The Advanced Player of the Tutorial Tower” on WEBTOON.
Good story which is in a good genre. Not too sure about the execution of the plot yet, since only a few chapters are done, but overall, based on what I have seen so far, it is pretty good!