There's only like 200 something chapters tho you must've read it somewhere else ig
Aight man 5k chapter
thats crazy
Fuuuuuck this Mo leng girl is goddamn toxic. She knows the consequences of her actions and how much it's affecting the people she considers her "friends" (*cough* tools *cough*) but she's unrelenting because of her manic obsession over Fleeting Time. The moments where she seems to be particularly clear minded and not muddled at all is what makes her terrifying. It also shows how aware she is of the situations she creates within her friend circle. This kind of deliberate scheming makes me sick. Not saying that suicide should be taken lightly or that you should ignore a friend in plight. But to treat someone who's tolerated you for 13 years as something to use and take advantage of as if it's your right just makes my impression on Mo Leng just that much worse. Everyone is literally begging her to let them play the game without IRL baggage but she's coming in with a fking wagon full of suitcases.
Completed! Short and sweet story, only 20 chaps. Wished it had elaborated the love scenes!
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nice story and I like very much nice nice
To be honest, this novel is now one of my favorite on Qidian (alongside TKA). The style is similar to Trafford's trading club where the customers' stories are a big part of the novel. However, I enjoy Number one dungeon supplier a lot more because the MC actually progresses and the grammar/writing is overall better.
I can only find one major problem with this novel: it is currently standing on the 2nd rank of original novels, which is completely undeserved.....it should clearly be 1st place.
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First of all, it's a very well-written book, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I will give my pros and cons now.
Pros:
-It's well-written and easy to understand, which is probably because the author is from America, and English is their mother tongue. But it doesn't matter since the story is great!
-The title of the book is great and unique.
-The background is well-explained, even though I wish there would have been some more information about his past and how the three of them became good friends.
Cons:
-The chapters are way too long. You should probably split them into smaller chapters, but not everyone will probably dislike it. Also, it seems the chapters become shorter as the story progresses, which is good, but you should probably fix the first chapters which are way too long.
-There are still some small information and grammar mistakes there and there in the story, but I'm sure after your book receives an editor, it will get fixed by him/her.
Those were my pros and cons, but overall, I still give this novel 5/5 stars because I see a great future for this book.
Story is good, mc is an idiot. Soo many plot holes and inconsistencies. Mc is all about himself one minute next he isn’ and vise versa. Harem is okay, but once again dense mc. It’ okay but would save your fp for better stories